Reviews of Rise of the Legendary Emperor
Rise of the Legendary Emperor
don_offl
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Hi guys this is your author Don here, Sorry for shamelessly writing a review for myself this is my first book so the writing quality might be low but ill try my best to improve everything related to writing a book please bear with me .... oh if you want a story with op mc building a kingdom conquering nearby kingdoms without collecting beauties like trophies this is for you..
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So this is a nice Book. The mc is op but still not invincible. That also means that the fights with him aren’t boring. The kingdom building didn’t start at the beginning but it’s still very good. I would say the only „bad“ thing about this book is the English. And it’s not that bad, there are just some spelling mistakes here and there. It’s alright. Great book 9/10 would recommend
Author I had a lot of expectations before reading this novel but after reading I was greatly disappointed ..in kingdom building novel where you said that he is not a usual MC with all goody personality but still he treats his subordinates as friends take oath to protect everyone ...how is this even possible and subjects such as elven girls Don't even fully respect him....are you kidding me if his subordinates don't even respect him fully and the MC don't let them kneel to pledge loyalty since he take them as his friend from get go are you kidding really and yeah can you add R-18 please we want ***** scenes too it's a main element in cases of empire and all after all kings takes many concubines and all so make it practical please
No harem, so pack your bags boys. Everyone else can stay, I guess... The world is certainly alive and all nice, the characters play nicely alone, and no one doesn't exist for the reason of convenience, except one girl. The world-building in this is extensive and although no army building has been seen yet, Chapter 30, I feel like if this done correctly, I'll keep reading this book. Btw not really OP MC since he gets yeeted out of existence before chapter 30. I hope we see Orks cuz green is da best and da strongest!
Greatly imaginative and entertaining. While you greatly succeeds in creating a world in which we see our protagonist go about, I would enjoy seeing more rhythm in your overall writing. Grammar mistakes disrupt the flow of the story on occasion, but these are understandable as it isn’t easy to write in a language which isn’t your first. I myself know this struggle very well and know you are doing your best to improve. The characters themselves seem, overall, rather wooden. In the sense that they show the potential to be interesting personages but, as a reader, I don’t necessarily feel sympathetic to them. I do note some improvement towards later chapters and advise you to simply keep going, as one cannot improve without practice. I wish you a lot of fun continuing your story.
I think this is a very good book the writing quality starts off fairly bad but definitely gets better later on. the characters are interesting and the plot is developing well. One thing I have to say is so far when characters are having discussions for plans they don't seem as well thought out as they should. dialogue also seems a little stiff in some places but for as how to fix that and if it improves later on in the book, I am not sure. I have only read up to chapter 58 this far.
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This is my favorite developing story. for those reading this ignore the tiny mistakes the story is worth it. im a very impatient person but this has the best story updating progression then the other developing stories. If you can send this author gifts as well. (it might increase the updates hopefully) keep up the good work don
This story was great the plot and specially it's characters. And for me, I really like it so much that I will recommend it to others for them to read. I'm not being bias here, it just that it get to my heart and my mind. I wish you will give us some wonderful work in the future. Thank you!!! I really love it. Fantastic and magnificent, I think this words can describe how perfect your story is. Even though that I'm more on, in an action story with a touch of fantasy, I really really like your story. But to think that I will fell in love in this story was unbelievable, also I really like it, thank so much