Review Detail of Saurav_Dedha in Rise of the Legendary Emperor

Well, the elves were the first to follow him when he didn't even have a kingdom to rule, as for the elven girls, its only Amaryll acts that way."MC don't let them kneel to pledge loyalty since he take them as his friend" the mc will make them bent their knees in the upcoming chapters. "still he treats his subordinates as friends take oath to protect everyone" that's how the oath taker works, the king and the subordinates both have to pledge their oaths so as a King, Don had to take an oath to protect his subjects

It's not like that you know we are talking about the legendary emperor not a savior or leader ITS EMPEROR we are talking about the proper discipline should be laid down that's how every subject is kept in check let's be casual do you think in ancient time any one after being impolite to king could survive not even royal family dare to do so ...and we are talking about EMPEROR if there is not a proper border in subject and king than I think lets drop the idea of the emperor and put the idea of Maseeah who's gonna save world from their problems and afterwards will leave this world to ascend to heaven rather than rule ..I'm not being impolite fellow it's just that this genre is my fav I have read almost every kingdom building and I was attracted to this novel after reading your synopsis where you have written that if you are bored of usual good MC and still I got to see the same MC who is good to the bone except the part he have said few tes that he will kill the traitor if there is which is more like reminding is that he is different please author just think that how much expectations I hold for this novel that I have taken this much time to write this big of a paragraph

yes, I've taken what you just said and in the next few chapters, you'll see the mc act like an emperor. The mc will make everyone bend their knees, no matter the elves or anyone, they will bend their knees.And please consider not dropping because I've made quite a changes in mc's character according to your review

Thanks author I'm glad that you are hungry learner that's how we should be and the problems I mentioned before are the main reasons that many readers only checked you first few chapters and than left ...afterall people like kingdom building because we want Ambitious MC who wants to CONQUER ALL...and in this novel you showed us that he is ambitious only by thoughts not action cause an ambitious person wouldn't reject honorifics and formalities afterall that's what he is seeking ABSOLUTE POWER and DOMINATION over all ...so please consider this and try to edit some earlier chapters to it will help this novel to grow more buddy and once again thanks for replying I almost dropped this novel today after getting disappointed after all I was so sad after giving this novel a lots of time to get disappointed later but I think you will do good and I know that you hate harem and let me tell you the reason why you hate it cause those MC takes girls in bunch just as trophies and don't do **** with them except saving them all the time so that's why don't add harem but can add R-18 parts and later on some concubines afterall their is no ancient rulers with only. one wife but at the end of the day it's your novel and that was my only last advice to make it novel one of the best genre and at last I WISH YOU VERY BEST IN THIS PROJECT so I see this in power ranking later on brother 🙂

well, I'm glad to hear from you. The thing is if the mc had a kingdom of his own from the starts I would have gone in the direction of absolute power and domination but as you know, our mc has nothing, he had to build a kingdom from scratch and revenge is the only motivation for him so I can't make him go for conquering all the kingdoms right off the bat.why you might have felt he didn't show his ambition in actions is he has no army in the first place but now he has an arm as well as many powerful subordinates under him so the upcoming arcs will be focused on purely increasing his power and building his kingdom to be the superpower among the rank 4 kingdoms." wouldn't reject honorifics and formalities after all" if you only waited a little bit, I wanted the readers to think just like you did because as a ruler he shouldn't avoid the formalities and he would come to a decision about this in the next few chapters. And finally, as I mentioned earlier, you *WILL* find many things that the mc do as wrong because he was not a king or prince in the divine continent, only now he's learning how to be a ruler or how to act like one but soon he will be a fully badass king!!!

I'm looking forward to it ..wish you a lots of creative ideas

So did he rally changed what he said he was going to change?

Actually buddy he was already on around 140 ch and I couldn't digest them to reach the new chapters with adjustment so I started my own novel lol 😅