Review Detail of vyxn in Rise of the Legendary Emperor

I think this is a very good book the writing quality starts off fairly bad but definitely gets better later on. the characters are interesting and the plot is developing well. One thing I have to say is so far when characters are having discussions for plans they don't seem as well thought out as they should. dialogue also seems a little stiff in some places but for as how to fix that and if it improves later on in the book, I am not sure. I have only read up to chapter 58 this far.