Reviews of Respected King Of Family Vampies(Blood Suckers)

The dimensions of the Sun are truly amazing: it has a diameter of 1.4 million km (109 times that of Earth), 12000 times the surface area of Earth, 333 000 times Earth's mass and 1.3 million times its volume... quite impressive if you consider the size of Earth itself. See I have googled it see the [img=recommend]surface area[img=faceslap] wise comparison and not take the tings to another level with your imaginations.

I was thinking this story is not liked by people after reading comments and reviews about grammar and some content. Also Grammar in starting chapters are not up to standards for many readers. I was thinking of rewriting 10 starting chapters. But my time was tight for few months also it was very difficult to write things from reading the already written contents. Some new people are still supporting the novel. I don't want my first novel to die, because of my negligence, so I am going to write new chapter after chapter 34. [img=recommend][img=recommend]

I have some work till 29th. so new chapters will be added after that. I will add delayed publish new chapter at this sunday. bey good readers. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

I like your story, but it is an awkward read. You need to work on your grammar and sentence structure. You have a good idea here. Now, all youbhave to do is to refine your idea into a clear and concise story.

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When I heard a beast incarnate I thought I would find a killer beast, unfortunately I found a fat and cute cow that is naive and stupid This is the hero, the zebra has become vegan and behaves as fairy tail world characters, cartoon characters, boring novel same stupid Chinese novels, there is no killing and no brutality, only comedy Childish, the 60-year-old hero acts like a 5-year-old child

In this chapter I have not explained the point of view of the bandit group. I will add it as bandit groups tragedy or something like that, after some little bit settlement of all parties in this other world. Sorry for this content if you think it's not proper. I will touch it little bit at night.

ok so i read this amd it just doesn't update barely at all if it updated more id give more stones to it but it just doesnt i kinda liked it i mean me personally im not into the whole big horned furry but if he was like human with massive body and horns ok i can live with that and enjoy it even more i mean it is a good story but the updates are not worth the wait and it looks like the author dropped the novel and i get that you know everyone wants their charactor overpowered and strong but it doesnt work out for most you have to make it extremely funny or just have alot of rivals that match his power or a very romantic style to it or something from what ive read and watched in anime and webnovel it works but most of those stories are usually dropped or dont do well the top stories usually build up strength from being weak or the weakest some good novels make it so their character is weak but has a good way to get strong or is a genius or something starting off extremely strong doesnt usually make the story interesting and even the whole weak to strong gets boring fast its about elements in a novel you have to balance it ill admit when i started reading this i was bored and just read it to read it kinda peaked my interest but not by much it didnt have me go oooo yea it updated when it finally updated i have quite a few novels that updates rarely and im finally going threw and clearing them updating is key and while i liked this novel there is barely any room to grow the best novels make you feel like your growing with the main character and are connected to the story and this just doesnt have it and most novels dont and some novels that do get sidetracked monster integration is one of them but they fixed it for more than a few chapters i felt myself drifting off of it it wasnt as interesting as before i felt disconnected from it or disconnecting from the story it felt almost repetitive but the ghoul chapters fixed it up and most novels have that lapse of time like that i know idk how i could forget the name but it has han Sen in it ill comment below the title when i go back but i went off track here your base story of system and vampire bull dude is a good plot maybe add an Academy to it and have a story around that for a little bit and him being an adventurer but when you add cross dimensions (as in multiple universe planet stuff) it to me doesn't feel as interesting now add say other worlds as in planes of existence like say relms of deities or something is ok rarely does a novel get away with the other kind now if it is more advanced like the Han sen and it is outer space centered then the second one is ok because the planets feel like another realm not an idk how to describe it an out of reach mediocre plane of existence like what you did bassicly my vampire system and han sen Novel gets away with other planets because of the story line it flows with it easily or at least can go with it it broadens their story but the God right off the bat is not always good most the time the stories suck unless put in like say with multiple God's and really an Academy or at least some form of a society where they can compete with each other maybe make your novel more organized and set up a hierarchy and build the character more in the beginning ive wrote enough i think sorry im not starting flames or nothing i did like the story line kinda it had a start to it but again no room to go like the vampire God novel the character was so op but it just got boring there was nothing left for him to do due to how the story progressed it made his character regress and he that was the only way for his character to grow was to reset himself yet still had no positive effect in the story

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Has many possibilities and love the idea behind it, a little difficult to read at some parts if you are a stickler for correct grammar and spelling. overall worth reading and trying it out.

next ch will come at night today[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

Sorry for the late ch's I will write 3 ch for 3 days from now in the week and from next week it will be 3 or more ch that will come. and again sorry for the late work. I was busy with something else for the time being but now I will continue[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].

thanks for support I will add one new chapter today. [img=recommend]FUN READING[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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even the synopsis is so poorly written, that it can't be understood. The grammar is so bad that you need to learn heroglyphics to read it lol

Okumaya başladığımda güzeldi ama okudukça anlam karmaşıklığı çok fazla olmaya başladı. İkinci kez okumaya başlayınca gittikçe daha fazla karışık oluyor.

like seriously this teasing is too much because the story is very interesting and as you read you can actually imagine being in that world and the comedy is superb but please I repeat please we need new chapters and fast[img=update][img=recommend]

a very nice and captivating story so far and I love it but please solve the grammar at the first chapters but other than that the mc is truly perfect

I have some work till 29th. So new chapter's will be added after that. bey good readers. [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

the grammar and numbers need fixing, stop adding too many zeros it gets annoying however other than that everything ok just please fix the numbers, I know you just smash keyboard just to type numbers