The dimensions of the Sun are truly amazing: it has a diameter of 1.4 million km (109 times that of Earth), 12000 times the surface area of Earth, 333 000 times Earth's mass and 1.3 million times its volume... quite impressive if you consider the size of Earth itself. See I have googled it see the [img=recommend]surface area[img=faceslap] wise comparison and not take the tings to another level with your imaginations.
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LIKEI agree that good gramma is needed for a novel but if its still readable then it’s okay as long as it doesn't turn into something worse than MTL…
Insomniac_7169:learn English before you try to write a novel. idiot