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Respected King Of Family Vampies(Blood Suckers)
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Respected King Of Family Vampies(Blood Suckers)

SaviorWrestle

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What is Respected King Of Family Vampies(Blood Suckers)

Respected King Of Family Vampies(Blood Suckers) is a popular web novel written by the author SaviorWrestle, covering EVOLUTION, SYSTEM, MONSTERS, VAMPIRES, ADVENTURE, DRAGONS, OVERPOWERED-MC, REBORN, WEAK-STRONG, BLOOD SUCKERS, Fantasy genres. It's viewed by 480.1K readers with an average rating of 4.23/5 and 23 reviews. The novel is being serialized to 35 chapters, new chapters will be published in Webnovel with all rights reserved.

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An old fellow which like fantasy stories in his last years of life after death reincarnated in a fantasy word of mana and evolution. In this 100000000 billion years world every person gets an evolution system from birth. see how this old man or new born makes whole fantasy world known of his existence.

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SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

reviews not help, please comment on the chapter which is not readable. I have worked on 1st and 2nd chapters before for increasing readability and still I think those 2 have no problem. I am not sure about grammar but I can make sure that the content will be readable. I skip some words while reading as I not read aloud and see the meaning but if you comment on specific chapters I will take my time to read it and work on the sentences.

SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

The dimensions of the Sun are truly amazing: it has a diameter of 1.4 million km (109 times that of Earth), 12000 times the surface area of Earth, 333 000 times Earth's mass and 1.3 million times its volume... quite impressive if you consider the size of Earth itself. See I have googled it see the [img=recommend]surface area[img=faceslap] wise comparison and not take the tings to another level with your imaginations.

type12345
type12345Lv4type12345

I like your story, but it is an awkward read. You need to work on your grammar and sentence structure. You have a good idea here. Now, all youbhave to do is to refine your idea into a clear and concise story.

Sculp
SculpLv4Sculp

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Monk_Roman
Monk_RomanLv5Monk_Roman

the english level is so bad that it's unreadable, a real pity because the content looks interesting. I hope the author will try to review his chapters.

timepiece94
timepiece94Lv5timepiece94

I cannot understand what the stories about most of the time the writing scattered does not sound like the author's first language is English but the story does sound promising from what I can tell it's pretty good I'm just going to wait a little longer until the chapters are edited better until then if you can understand it read it it's pretty good other than that all I can say is wait

MYOPHIA
MYOPHIALv3MYOPHIA

Take it easy, I have no interests in flat-chested lolis!Take it easy, I have no interests in flat-chested lolis!Take it easy, I have no interests in flat-chested lolis!Take it easy, I have no interests in flat-chested lolis!Take it easy, I have no interests in flat-chested lolis!Take it easy, I have no interests in flat-chested lolis!

BBQChickenAlertBB
BBQChickenAlertBBLv3BBQChickenAlertBB

Has many possibilities and love the idea behind it, a little difficult to read at some parts if you are a stickler for correct grammar and spelling. overall worth reading and trying it out.

SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

pleas read and leave comments, [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

next ch will come at night today[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update]

SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

Sorry for the late ch's I will write 3 ch for 3 days from now in the week and from next week it will be 3 or more ch that will come. and again sorry for the late work. I was busy with something else for the time being but now I will continue[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend].

SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

thanks for support I will add one new chapter today. [img=recommend]FUN READING[img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

hostile_fire
hostile_fireLv3hostile_fire

the grammar and numbers need fixing, stop adding too many zeros it gets annoying however other than that everything ok just please fix the numbers, I know you just smash keyboard just to type numbers

Dao_of_mischeif
Dao_of_mischeifLv4Dao_of_mischeif

Never read it but looks like a food novel don't mind the rating though it's just[img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]

AbysmalNights
AbysmalNightsLv3AbysmalNights

This book is very entertaining to read and is also very catching! The only thing i wanna say is that its confusing with swapping between POV’s all the time and it would be better to swap only when its important. the storyline is well thought out though and gives you the idea of actually feeling what the characters feel which is very important as not a lot of writers do that and only write whats happening and not the feelings behind every thought! Overall its a fanstic book and just needs to update more often for more people to read, overall thank you!!!

Fk_Fk
Fk_FkLv3Fk_Fk

goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooppppoood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

t650825t
t650825tLv4t650825t

Goooooood gooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooood gooooooooooooooooo

UMT_082903
UMT_082903Lv3UMT_082903

The story is very good,..the characters and story line is good too. So next chapter Pleaaasseee...............................................

SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

I summoned this merciless butcher in this chapter with not taking anymore time of my precious readers. Its updating slow these days I also want to complete it fast but I am not feeling to write it fast as novel has very few comments on ch and powerstones. So I am just doing some story.

SaviorWrestle
SaviorWrestleAuthorSaviorWrestle

I will send 2 chapters in 24 hrs and also 4 more ch till this sunday. Sorry I am delaying things from last week I don't want to commit anymore than today. Happy reading. Also please comment and give power stones. Remember Comments and reviews[img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend] are the only motivation for me to write,

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