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Lucien121
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ok so i read this amd it just doesn't update barely at all if it updated more id give more stones to it but it just doesnt i kinda liked it i mean me personally im not into the whole big horned furry but if he was like human with massive body and horns ok i can live with that and enjoy it even more i mean it is a good story but the updates are not worth the wait and it looks like the author dropped the novel and i get that you know everyone wants their charactor overpowered and strong but it doesnt work out for most you have to make it extremely funny or just have alot of rivals that match his power or a very romantic style to it or something from what ive read and watched in anime and webnovel it works but most of those stories are usually dropped or dont do well the top stories usually build up strength from being weak or the weakest some good novels make it so their character is weak but has a good way to get strong or is a genius or something starting off extremely strong doesnt usually make the story interesting and even the whole weak to strong gets boring fast its about elements in a novel you have to balance it ill admit when i started reading this i was bored and just read it to read it kinda peaked my interest but not by much it didnt have me go oooo yea it updated when it finally updated i have quite a few novels that updates rarely and im finally going threw and clearing them updating is key and while i liked this novel there is barely any room to grow the best novels make you feel like your growing with the main character and are connected to the story and this just doesnt have it and most novels dont and some novels that do get sidetracked monster integration is one of them but they fixed it for more than a few chapters i felt myself drifting off of it it wasnt as interesting as before i felt disconnected from it or disconnecting from the story it felt almost repetitive but the ghoul chapters fixed it up and most novels have that lapse of time like that i know idk how i could forget the name but it has han Sen in it ill comment below the title when i go back but i went off track here your base story of system and vampire bull dude is a good plot maybe add an Academy to it and have a story around that for a little bit and him being an adventurer but when you add cross dimensions (as in multiple universe planet stuff) it to me doesn't feel as interesting now add say other worlds as in planes of existence like say relms of deities or something is ok rarely does a novel get away with the other kind now if it is more advanced like the Han sen and it is outer space centered then the second one is ok because the planets feel like another realm not an idk how to describe it an out of reach mediocre plane of existence like what you did bassicly my vampire system and han sen Novel gets away with other planets because of the story line it flows with it easily or at least can go with it it broadens their story but the God right off the bat is not always good most the time the stories suck unless put in like say with multiple God's and really an Academy or at least some form of a society where they can compete with each other maybe make your novel more organized and set up a hierarchy and build the character more in the beginning ive wrote enough i think sorry im not starting flames or nothing i did like the story line kinda it had a start to it but again no room to go like the vampire God novel the character was so op but it just got boring there was nothing left for him to do due to how the story progressed it made his character regress and he that was the only way for his character to grow was to reset himself yet still had no positive effect in the story

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Lucien121
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han sen is from super gene

SaviorWrestle
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not updating and so not need to give stones, reader they are old messages and reviews.

Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15Lucien121

yea kinda figured after while lol👍

SaviorWrestle:not updating and so not need to give stones, reader they are old messages and reviews.
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Its hell boring, system this system that, I don't want system in my novel first but without this explaining the things will become hard. How mc get his power what he is going to do and my novel is a hard plot with summoning world so its basically a compromise from my side to get a better plot. but my first novel have many grammatical mistakes, so I kind of not like it. and stopped updating as its very much lagging in readability.

Lucien121
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yea honestly it was kinda boring i read it cause i was bored if you want an idea about summoning i can proboly give one

SaviorWrestle:Its hell boring, system this system that, I don't want system in my novel first but without this explaining the things will become hard. How mc get his power what he is going to do and my novel is a hard plot with summoning world so its basically a compromise from my side to get a better plot. but my first novel have many grammatical mistakes, so I kind of not like it. and stopped updating as its very much lagging in readability.