zad1333
Surprising there is not a review yet. Anyway, I'm not deep into this novel yet, so I can't give a score, therefore it'll be a 5 and I'll change it or not as I read along. The grammar is pretty good, no major mistake I've seen. Considering the chapters were supposed to be 1 per week at the beginning, this quality is expected. The novel is another system novel with a semi immortal mc. BUT! The way it works is interesting and unlike anything I've ever read so I'm kinda looking forward to the progression. Considering he is a "living God" you should expect some opness. It might not be that kind of story further along the line, and I don't really care if he's Op or not ( I like Op mcs), so don't go reading this expecting something too different and complain about it. Overall, I wish the author the best and I can't wait to see how this story evolves. Godspeed ๐
Just not good, I got to chapter 4 and couldnt keep going. Some people will like it because of the comical aproach but this is not my thing. Stupid comedy is not my type of comedy when I am reading something. There are other problems but I will stop here since I only got to chapter 4. Maybe I will read it someday (hell no).
after 2 years of being on webnovel this is my first review Ive made and honestly this novel was well worth it to spend the time to make this. the grammar usage and some spelling errors were made but still a higher quality then hundreds of other novels I have read. there was a few times I believe the story was rushed but the author made you connect with the characters and the development of those characters personality was well thought out compared to what I'm used to reading. I'm excited on what other interesting novels you imagination may bring out.
Iโve never written a review before, so forgive me if I seem to go on a tangent or something similar. I loved this novel. The only reason I gave a 4 star in writing quality instead of a 5 is because a good amount of words were misspelled, but that that can be easily overlooked in my opinion. I feel like zad, the author, really cared for this story and put a lot of effort into this. The characters are well-made and sometimes give some well-timed comedic relief with maybe a pop culture reference or just good old shenanigans. The ending seemed slightly rushed, but the author did it in such a way that it wasnโt poorly made. Overall, this has been my favorite novel in a long time and I highly recommend it to anyone hesitant in starting it.