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why take away bells op development skill? there's no need to deliberately nerf him just to make the mc look better,hah Chinese mc syndrome
so you can literally make a barrier that passively filter out all things the user deems harmful to the body including light and sound and even nuclear fallout when he was 10 years old ,but gets taken down by a gas which is much easier to get rid of by comparaison? also if the entire base is filled with the stuff why are none of the subordinate ninjas affected? if you wanted him to get captured for being too arrogant do it against someone who would actually pose a challenge(l would ve accepted this better from darkside at least could've said it was some different dimension poison or something even though vector control can literally stop dark matter from a different dimension but still...) but anyway I guess this is your way of introducing tension and him gaining the black wings even though it was super forced? also don't say the underlyings have an antidote or are immune cause if that's the case tom should be been knocked out immediately after entering the base, contrary to What you are trying to portray vector control doesn't improve the base condition of the human body that is to say without it tom and accelerator himself are just normal human beings so either the barrier was up and filtered the poison completely or it didn't at all ie mc should have been feeling its effect as soon as it was spread.
filling in word count huh
no that's just you
screwing over even more people
I Imagine you can grab her with haki with haki to
Don't do it. its's been confirmed she is jailbait
not really, even if you did tell it's not like they can do anything about it ur just trying to make look more cool by faking mysteriousness
there are demonic swords as well, as a devil why does he think he can mesh well with holy weapons?
Ah hem at the very least she scales around high tier ultimate class and low tier maoh class
that's cool it's your fic, I'll just leave you a quote that you may or may not listen to "when everyone is super,no one is
she ain't that hot
literally hundreds you didn't read very far into the original did you?
literally hundreds you didn't read very far into the original did you