Review Detail of TallicaStew in Reincarnation of a living god

This was a pretty good 1st novel from a non-native English speaker. There are a Lot of grammar and spelling errors, as well as some formatting issues and the work really needs a good editing all the way through before it can actually be called finished. Despite that, this is a wonderfully entertaining and well laid out story. it goes just long enough while ending in a satisfying manner while leaving enough room in the world for the author to continue on later, whether it be with the MC or someone related. At the very least I would have liked a scene with the kids visiting their grandmother and uncle.