Zefelina
One of the best HP fanfic i've ever read. Nice pace, fkin great world-building AND THE MOST IMPORTANT PART- MC is loveable, smart and has a great development through the story. Oh yeah, if you are interested, it has great grammar and is easy to read even for a foreigners ''cough-cough". Thank's for your hard work.
Until this series, I don't think i have ever been able to read a fan fiction beyond the first few chapters. I binged this over the weekend. I love the view of the Wizarding world from the perspective of a 'pureblood' tempered by the awareness of a transmigrated reader of the books. Almost everything landed for me in this series; -the smarter classier version of Malfoy, -the deep exploration of magic that was never really addressed in the books. -the nuance in the good vs evil/light vs dark perspectives with Malfoy being more grey, -the political and cultural ramifications of muggle born wizards integrating and changing magical society is fascinating. -It changes the purely racist, evil, and unrelateable stance of purebloods in the books to an understandable fear of their culture being lost or destroyed. I even liked the inclusion of differences between pureblood and muggle born magic affinities with both having their advantages. Obviously, there are still the extremist hardliners that are pretty evil but even that has some compelling reasons behind it. I love the exploration of what motivates the characters and the different views they have. As for my personal low points; -The rescue mission in the Egypt arc early on(wasn't terrible just didn't spark my interest). -I get nervous when the story gets close to addressing his transmigration status(could go either way for me). -I get a little annoyed when certain characters (2 of them) misunderstand and ascribe Gryfindorish/heroic traits to the MC when it is in opposition to his actual motives and character. It's rare and usually played for a laugh. (overuse of that one killed another series for me called 'Trash of the Count's Family')
This series is great. It's really interesting seeing things from a pure blood point of view. I think you did an amazing job keeping all the other character personality and how Draco being OP is actually a mix of his hardwork and maturity since he's a 30 years old man. The story is a little slow paced but at the same time builds a whole new universe around Draco so that a good thing. I like how there's interesting new characters that can probably change the course of the story. Please keep the good work.
I will be a bit shameless and review my own story a bit. Though I am not shameless enough to give myself full 5 stars ;] I wrote this story because I think that Harry Potter, as my favorite book, lacks self inserts in fan-fictions. I want this story to be from the perspective of purebloods - why they value their traditions, dark magic and their blood. And why they started the war at all. A lot of the plot will be focused on Draco trying to avoid the 'flags' while not affecting the book's plot. However, whether he succeeds... well that's another question.
This is one of those fanfics that have HIGH QUALITY, but LOW SPEED and you know what?! I fu**ing love that. Because there tons of **** HP fanfics at webnovel, but this one is really amazing. Author creates his own story, not just CTRL+C, CTRL+V. Thank you so much bro, i'll give you all my stones after every update ^^
It's got a good character development for Draco, spending time to explain what changes are happening before heading to Hogwarts. The English is good enough for me to follow without any effort. Also I like the fact that the author is spending time to introduce the magical societies from other countries.
Here's my epic review 😉: This is sooooo good. I've read few HP fun- fic, but this novel is a true gem. I really like that MC is NOT op, just normal guy in abnormal situation, trying his best and working hard. Even though we have few rules, laid for us in original story, author really made brilliant world, elaborate all those details that were omitted in original. LOVE IT! And the best is NO HAREM. Thank you author (bows deeply*). I really look forward seeing how the story will develop in the future. Try it, people I tell ya, you will enjoy it!!🤩
I love this book so much. One of the best Draco Malfoy's fanfic I've ever read. So many details that filled the loopholes in the original story that I even not think about it before, but the author explain it spendidly. I am very much hope the author will be back and update the story again because its been months since she gone hiatus. Love you, my dear author.
Well it started very well at the beginning you can see his childhood what he is learning and so on but after a certain time it becomes very boring and feels very drawn I even skipped a few chapters because nothing happened per se I mean I jumpt from chap 19 to 30 and he's still not at Hogwarts. and as always **** you sons of bitches spam bots you are all worthless and useless pieces of **** to be exterminated