Review Detail of Zefelina in Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy
Review detail
I will be a bit shameless and review my own story a bit. Though I am not shameless enough to give myself full 5 stars ;] I wrote this story because I think that Harry Potter, as my favorite book, lacks self inserts in fan-fictions. I want this story to be from the perspective of purebloods - why they value their traditions, dark magic and their blood. And why they started the war at all. A lot of the plot will be focused on Draco trying to avoid the 'flags' while not affecting the book's plot. However, whether he succeeds... well that's another question.
Reincarnation: Draco Malfoy
Zefelina
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Bro. Or sis. Actually there are no girls on the internet, bro. Anyways I hope theres no unreasonable steamrolling. Thats what alot of fanfics get wrong. They just usurp the MC's position with a mary sue. The last jedi is a prime example of one such fanfic although it only diminished what they did and didn't cut out most of the major events for past MCs.
NorthernWind:Bro. Or sis. Actually there are no girls on the internet, bro. Anyways I hope theres no unreasonable steamrolling. Thats what alot of fanfics get wrong. They just usurp the MC's position with a mary sue. The last jedi is a prime example of one such fanfic although it only diminished what they did and didn't cut out most of the major events for past MCs.
Dude we all know you plan to harem... a few chapters in hes already flirting up 7 to 8 yr old girls and you even wrote in the comments stuff about how your not sure.... dont lie to get readers i aint gona read a novel about a emotionally dependant mc who cant handle a single thing without validation because of a damn Oedipus complex
Zefelina:Not a harem
He's 11... mentally over 30... you really think he's gonna form a harem with kids? I didn't lie when I said there wouldn't be harem because I personally dislike them. He also met and is friendly with a few boys and some readers are speculating about bxb relationship. Doesn't mean it will happen... same with girls.
Rawr_Kitten:Dude we all know you plan to harem... a few chapters in hes already flirting up 7 to 8 yr old girls and you even wrote in the comments stuff about how your not sure.... dont lie to get readers i aint gona read a novel about a emotionally dependant mc who cant handle a single thing without validation because of a damn Oedipus complex
So far the way relationships are being handled has been excellent IMO, they feel real. About what I would expect from kids. I usually just put up with harem since it is so prevalent, Its nice when i don't have to. First girl wins appears to have been avoided too, which is usually a plus. As long as it doesn't turn into a will-they-won't-they tease till the end or bxb, I'm good. Keep it up!
Zefelina:He's 11... mentally over 30... you really think he's gonna form a harem with kids? I didn't lie when I said there wouldn't be harem because I personally dislike them. He also met and is friendly with a few boys and some readers are speculating about bxb relationship. Doesn't mean it will happen... same with girls.
If you want shameless try a story with a million views but no 1-2 star reviews(I really did just go through and check). It doesn't matter how perfect a story is because that just doesn't happen naturally on this site. Can't even say it's because they weren't really reviews because again, 1 million views. Someone at some point must have left a genuine review with 1-2 stars and you still deleted it. Now that's shameless. The closest that remains is some guy that reviewed "......................................." with a 2 1/2 star rating. It's neutral and won't affect ratings either way so that must be why it's still here. Your as bad as Ghostyz with this bullsht... They don't let authors manage reviews so you can lie to everyone about having a flawless story. They do it because people spam nonsense for exp. You're abusing the system and it defeats the purpose of review sections. This shouldn't be happening and I hope the site takes the privilege back from you authors soon. There's just no way I can buy this is natural. If it was the math would come out to something like 1 "negative" review to every 100 positive ones which is kind of ridiculous for what it is. Fanfiction is already too opinionated without it being hosted on a site like this one that's always had people with things to say. After 70 chapters someone must have had something to say about what they didn't like especially since I've read some of it and it isn't that great.
Daoist_Dan:If you want shameless try a story with a million views but no 1-2 star reviews(I really did just go through and check). It doesn't matter how perfect a story is because that just doesn't happen naturally on this site. Can't even say it's because they weren't really reviews because again, 1 million views. Someone at some point must have left a genuine review with 1-2 stars and you still deleted it. Now that's shameless. The closest that remains is some guy that reviewed "......................................." with a 2 1/2 star rating. It's neutral and won't affect ratings either way so that must be why it's still here. Your as bad as Ghostyz with this bullsht... They don't let authors manage reviews so you can lie to everyone about having a flawless story. They do it because people spam nonsense for exp. You're abusing the system and it defeats the purpose of review sections. This shouldn't be happening and I hope the site takes the privilege back from you authors soon. There's just no way I can buy this is natural. If it was the math would come out to something like 1 "negative" review to every 100 positive ones which is kind of ridiculous for what it is. Fanfiction is already too opinionated without it being hosted on a site like this one that's always had people with things to say. After 70 chapters someone must have had something to say about what they didn't like especially since I've read some of it and it isn't that great.
