Fate_go_Player
it's great like this song ๐ตGunter, why did you gunt my fries?๐ถ I gunted them, and they were mine.What ๐ตkind of gunt gunts his Gunter's fries,๐ถ And doesn't even gunt him in the eyes?๐ต ๐ถGunter, there were tears there.๐ถ If you gunted them, would you even care?๐ตGunter, do you even love me?๐ต
The mc has zero self respect and without a little pride.Well people can make him do house cleaning and washing their underwear, while he was demon king.Godess of life literally just made his entire race extinct, with schemes. What did he do, nothing .Not even planning to do any harm to her, who is hunting him for the time he was born. Just wow!!!
I had hope for this novel but because of the degenerates who love harem(Shit stains of the world) this novel was tainted. I have fully given up hope on this novel it was good until chap 1- 119 until this author put out a pole for harem or not, bullshit. Complete and utter bullshit I hope your happy author, with your decision.
He asks a lot of unnecessary questions that he already knows. He asks and asks and asks as if he was born yesterday and did not train and goes through the fights of life and death as if he is not from another world and as if he is not a strong being. For half the story, he is supposed to be a cold character, few words and a lot of listening in front of the gods, who acts like an idiot, why don't you kill me, why don't you tell the rest of my whereabouts, how you found me, how, how, and he gives a detailed explanation of any question asked to him as if he was a criminal arrested without talking about his strength that we didn't see what's the point of A pen if you can't write what's the use of strength if you're afraid of being lost
To be honest, in the beginning I assumed this was gonna die early on, but boy was I wrong. The writing quality was quite low in the first arc, but bam, out of no where it gets 10x better. Enjoying this a lot more than I thought. No annoying system but equals. Super OP but still uses his brain. Enjoyed more than I expected, hopefully this keeps up :)
Here's my overall opinion on the novel. Writing quality: There are quite a lot of spelling mistakes. They're mostly missing letters and additional letters. The author has a tendency to add a lot of spacing between sentences (As in seperation between paragraphs, not spaces between words and such) but they get rid of it around 40 chapters in and it's not necessarily unimmersive. And despite what I will say in Story Development, the author is good at keeping the reader entertained. Even if most of his jokes fall flat. I have to say, my biggest problem that I have with the story is that the author does several pretty generic and aggravating cliche's, but because of the novels pacing they will be done in at most a few pages. Story development: I have to say that this might be the only reason I stayed. The pacing of the story is a bit fast but that works in its favor because whenever there was a cliche that annoyed me, it would be done in a 2-4 pages with maybe a small reappearance later. If you run into something you dont like, I recommend skimming by quickly. The overall story is enjoyable but it would suck if it was ruined because of something you didn't like. About the MC himself? If you like a story with a mc who overcomes obstacles to become stronger... hehehe. Not a thing here buddy, Not. At. All. I think he reaches his peak strength at like chapter 40 or so. And then he just refines his powers. Character Designs: What I'll refer to as the NPC's aren't overly unique and eye catching in their personality, but the conversations and such flow well together making the talks understandable and at the least, not boring. World Background: Its nothing detailed like Eragon or The Land (actual published novels) obviously but that means it doesn't bore you with the nitty gritty so I guess that's a plus.
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Mc gets nerfed I am the exp of my sword. webnovel is my body, and power stones are my blood. I have created over a thousand useless reviews. unknown to death, nor known to life. have withstood pain to create many reviews. Yet, those eyes will never read something good. So, as I pray... Unlimited Exp Works!