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Frankly it is well written. But it's filled with the typical inconsistency of a generic Chinese novel. The guy, he is three years old but he travels around the empire with his so-called master. Tell me even with Chinese novels which master does this. Usually it's around the age of 10 but hey...Example: I was born in the biggest empire on the continent, a few chapters later we learn that he is barely above average. Basically, you should expect this kind of inconsistency. And also it's the kind of story where every place the protagonist passes, there is a problem that suddenly it's solved by his system so it's the kind of novel that is really average. And even this note is because we can easily find worse.
This is the kind of deceptive author who for the gender of the mc . Explains that it's a guy then in the middle of the story that it's a woman or a futa . But a tag or warns in the synopsis. Then they complain that we complain. It's the pot calling the kettle black. π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©π©
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Thanks for this chapter. Author-san it's been a long time since I read a novel in its early stages and I must say that your did not disappoint me. I'm only afraid that the MC doesn't use his support when he needs it . After now it's more of a personal request. I really want the mc to create his own skills, physical and make his mother and his cult even stronger. Well it's a selfish request but I'm sure I'm not the only one among your readers to have this request.
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Author thank you for this chapter. So far I'm enjoying your novel and there's nothing I don't like about it, there's just one small problem. The relationships. Kay is bound to hook up with Olivia and to even strengthen that relationship, you put in a lot of clues. For example: the fact that the little brother has a crush on her; that Jay scares her; Olivia's closest allies see her as either a sister or a leader worthy of admiration; and then to top it all off, there's a contract. And her clues, they started, like, 50 chapters ago. I don't care if her brother is a love interest, but it's not forced like that. It has to be natural. You're not going to do the same for the others, are you? I hope not!
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