Great book! Few spelling errors, but has a great flow! Binged the whole thing. Keep up the great work!

thanks for the chappy

Went premium way to early (Ch 18). The reader barely knows anything about the world or the MC. MC is smart, and bold. Other characters (From what I could read) didnt have much personality.

angel

So im not all that bright and I tend to read till I fall asleep so sometimes I miss stuff. Did I miss where things went wrong and he became a slave or has that yet to be explained?

binged this novel in one day.

No, i want to apologize for my review. it was needlessly harsh. Yes the chapters were small and yes the grammar needed addressing, but i should not have been so callous and unforgiving to an author trying their best. If you want I can delete this comment so future readers can make their own assessments on your new and improved work.

This can not even be considered a story. the "chapters" are only a paragraph long. the writing quality is horrendous.

The grammar makes it very, very difficult to read. That is it. I have not gone past chapter 5 because i could not read the story. it was awful.

if I had money I would give it! this book is so good I left it in my reading que checking everyday you were gone. thank you so much author!

great chapter, but someone decided to chop onions somewhere 😭😭😭

i agree. the book itself is not half bad, but it kinda gets ruined by the authors defeatism and pessimistic attitude.

No I did not

sub chapter of the club! my writing skills couldnt do this story an iota of justice

ill just make my own 'unofficial' sub-chapter. no permissions needed!

I want to join the fan club!!

this cheeky system XD

🎵 the sun is a deadly laser 🎵

this is my favorite pokemon fanfic! amazing job author please keep up the greater work! I have high hopes