Your dialogue is super confusing, I don't know who is talking first or second or replying. Hope you can fix that! Goodluck

What a reference :D

This emoji got me good hahah

Seems the MC is becoming weaker. Can't even think or act for himself.

Nice chapter! :) Refreshing way to handle the USJ, the MC knew his limits and actually acted accordingly, no rash fighting or risking the ire of teachers. Good job!

You gotta drop the trust levels in Shuri, that's some bs betrayal against our MC.

+1

So dumb...

Thanks for another quality chapter :)

+1

There better be vicious revenge on Hippolyta....

Maybe main problem is the speed at which the conflict happened? There was no lead up, it was instantly, "go destroy city MUAHAHAHA" with little motivation. It seemed a little impulsive and out of character. I do not really mind evil MCs and what not, crushing the good guys, buuuuut the reasoning seemed a bit shallow. But yeah im kinda dumb as well, I like your concept and the power leveling, so I hope if you do fix it right up, and you continue going strong.

World travel done right imo :)

I really like the force unleashed games and star wars in general, so super excited too see how this plays out, good luck!

If he can recover his legs you got a shot at a decent story, otherwise idk kinda lame being in a wheelchair the whole time. But don't let me curb your passion, keep going with your writing! :)

dumb

Channel you inner Tyrion for us please :)

kinda bs ngl, that stuff with the gods kinda meh

I like it, you're building up the suspense between the meeting between lucifer and micheal nicely, im looking forward to it. Although it does feel like Micheal is quick to rage is many situations. Understandable for now since he has lost a lot, and is suffering in his own right, but I hope to see some character development there, learn to accept loss and gain some wisdom in the process. Also, are you going to explore religious ideas and themes later on? Like the commandments and sins are interesting concepts, also things like blind religious devotion vs skepticism and doubt. But yeah good job! Have a stone :)

damn, well this is a drop