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This story is great. I love the thrilling events and all those near death experiences he had. I can't wait to see what will happen to him during his stay in the academy. I love the story on how he got and keep his powers to protect everyone who's important to him. Please keep on giving us a very creative and unique plot for the story. Keep up the good work.
The author has chosen a good storyline. There are many interesting things inside the story as one read it. Though author has to work on the grammar. The punctuation marks and capital letters proper placement will beautify this work. Try using Grammerly to reduce such errors. Overall story is good. Keep up with the work author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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