The author has chosen a good storyline. There are many interesting things inside the story as one read it. Though author has to work on the grammar. The punctuation marks and capital letters proper placement will beautify this work. Try using Grammerly to reduce such errors. Overall story is good. Keep up with the work author.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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