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Read 2 chapters, premise is excellent its execution is terrible best part of novel is synopsis Mc meets 'god' asking how he is meant to survive in marvel against beings like thanos. FUCKING REALLY? Dialogue with one another is unbearable to read due to its stupidity A supposed god brings him their only because he complained a little, REALLY?
Great story man and it’s not rushed unlike some fanfic here. Just a little improvement with grammar and your set. Hope you don’t drop it! Maybe a little advice, since I know someone who writes fanfics too. Make sure you have a proper character sheet and timeline specially If your planning on changing canon. Just so you won’t drop this fanfic cause of timeline issues or plot deadends.
So far so good!!! I really like the setup of the story. I've always thought a Grant Ward self insert would be interesting and it hasn't disappointed. I would like to see the team hold onto their feelings of mistrust for awhile, otherwise it will seem a little forced. The grammer is pretty good, much better than the majority of novels on this site. The story flows smoothly and I can't wait for future releases. Thanks for a great story! What can I say except, (Please don't drop this!!! And Please no harem!!!) you're welcome.