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Such a shame, the story got me really hooked but the writing quality makes it a headache to read and understand. Fast passed, the story is going fast, random things happens when there is already something going on. Characters interactions could be more deep and meaningful, tbh I didnβt feel that much emotions and thoughts behind the conversations. Also I donβt quite yet understand the MC on a deeper level, he just does stuffs.
So the story is pretty good so far while Iβm at chapter 55. The pacing is nice, the skills seem interesting, and it looks like there is a lot of potential for world building. That being said, it seems to be heading in a direction that makes me feel like I might drop it soon sadly. Iβll list the pros and cons below Pros: -Good pacing -Cool abilities -OP protagonist, if youβre into that -Only about 120~ chapters are in VR, then it goes to real-world (from what I have seen) -Interesting power system of gods and blessings Cons: -Grammar is fine most of the time, weird at other times, and occasionally requires you to read something a few times to understand -A few plot holes -Some illogical power scaling - the Romance (this is making me think about dropping) This will be more detailed as itβs my biggest issue so far. So far, the female lead serve to do 3 things: blush when the MC says something, stutter when interacting with the MC, and receive things from the MCβ¦im not exaggerating. Her unique class, her equipment, her summons, her spells, all from the MC. She is useless 99+% of the time and itβs to the point where the main female side character, who hasnβt gotten as much screen time, is more persuasive as a love interest (no harem confirmed so all hope is lost π). To top it off, the MC changes his whole personality when he is with her. About 18 of the 55 chapters Iβve read so far has been centered around them together so there is thatβ¦ Iβll try some more chapters but itβs not looking good. The worst part is, I feel this behavoiur will get worse when it switches from VR to real life. TLDR: Pretty decent so far, not too many errors but they are apparent, the romance is ruining the story and unless something changes, Iβll probably drop.
I definitely recommend this book it's a fun read. However, honestly I'm kinda annoyed that the author had the gall to say/ask for readers not to complain about the writing quality but instead point the mistakes out, and here the readers are pointing them out but even after a month or more few to none were addressed or fixed. IDK maybe it's just some that have slipped through the cracks but either way as a reader its kinda annoying.
Cons: The grammar is horrid and is almost nonexistent, a few characters feel unnecessary and I just hate even if they have a purpose, such as the sister. She might give the MC a purpose, but it's bad if I hope she dies in every single chapter she is in. The novel uses a ridiculous amount of cliches and is like I said, inconsistent. For ex. in one of the early chapters which was a small example, The notification literally notified him it was nora in front of him but he asked himself where nora is (as if she's not there). Also in one chapter the author forgot to add a description of a class and said they would as soon as possible, its been a month since. The rules that the author makes are inconsistent for example at one point the MC sadly states he can't use a spear because he's a warrior, and then comments right after that classes can use any weapon. Then a few paragraphs later he begins using a spear which I don't know how he has, because according to him warriors start with a sword and shield. He then instead of being a warrior becomes a mage, which is acceptable, but using the very same logic from earlier he shouldn't be able to use a spear but does. Pros: The story seemed bearable and maybe a decent read if the grammar was fixed. Not too many here. Giving it two stars because it actually kept me reading like 5 chapters.
This story is alright. First thing you notice is writing quality, which is poor. It sounds like a non-native speaker wrote it. I can't really comment on update stability, so I gave it 5 stars. Story development is pretty basic, and I was hoping to feel...more. It's somewhat superficial and honestly required some deeper thought. MC's just running around completing tasks right now without thinking much. Honestly feeling a little bored. Character is pretty basic. Props to actively choosing not to have a Harem. World background is a little disappointing at this point in the story. There's random GM interference to make the journey harder for the MC. It seems highly unnecessary. Also, he decided to add Gods and God's apostles early and make the MC into one, which seems a bit much. I don't know. Honestly just expect more, since the story has a lot of potential.
the story is common in a lot of Chinese novel, go back in time-> use knowledge to make big money and an head start+ op grow gear (maybe). an big bad event is gonna happened and need to get ready for that and that's about it. this is a fine story but an big problem that some story have and a lot of people don't like this. and that is by making other people(side character) weak to make the main character strong, For Example: MC spent hours trying to mastery the spear, but somehow he still got first boss kill and first dungeon, even in todays gaming world, people that rush or try rushing past the mobs/group of people at the start of an new game is very common, and they are hardcore players. so the facts that MC still get first kill bonus. is pushing the plot a bit too much. like the first boss kill can happened in like the first 10 hours of the game. base on how long MC took to level.