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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Commented

    漫威的霍格沃兹巫师 is the Chinese name, marvels Hogwart wizard

    Ch 1 Marvel World
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    An Otherworldly Magician [HP X Marvel]
    Anime & Comics · ethen098
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Commented

    哈利波特之罪恶之书 harry potter book of crimes is another one but 2k ch long both of these book have HP as background and work on a story thats new

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]
    Book&Literature · BoOk_LoV3r_429
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Commented

    哈利波之炼金术士 is the name and it's over 1k ch, author is Chinese so his use of words is in a Chinese way.good luck 🤞

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
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    HP: The Alchemist [DROPPED]
    Book&Literature · BoOk_LoV3r_429
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Replied to Vampjager

    hate to say it but i think he's was there for the kids.

    "25 gold coins." 
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    Leave Me Alone, Heroines!
    Fantasy · ClashingBlades98
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Commented

    why is True God Realm 11 and Emperor Realm 21???

    Ch -2 Cultivation Realms!
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    I Quit Being The Villain
    Urban · Kurupts
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Posted

    story development-character design- world background. the author added nothing of his own to this story other than having the MC be control by the author like in the game where we play has the MC. and just follow the story, which explains the stability of updates. we all know these character, nothing is the authors. if the author made his own character than yea sure. but do something interesting. Because even now GI is still an developing story. you have the whole world of GI to write about and use but instead just copy and paste the story. that's something the author can do in the future. but now the author created nothing even if this's an fan-fic. which puts it in the low-ter of fan-fic

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    Genshin Impact: Another Life
    Video Games · some_writer
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Commented

    int should be perception like perception of time . the ability's to processed what you just see with your eyes. the FPS if you will. if you want to be a speed build and see the world in slowmo than all stats is the way to go. if you want to take IRL stats. if not than all agility and use a gun for op start.

    Intelligence = MP and perhaps better reasoning...?
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    Solo Leveling Through in the Multiverse.
    Anime & Comics · oShaman
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Posted

    translated with google translation name of the novel is 漫威:从忍界开始交易 Marvel: trade, starting with Naruto the trading is just a way to take things from different world. and get stuff. first world is naruto than one piece.

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    Marvel: Trading on Tv 1
    Anime & Comics · Amanda_Botelho_Fre
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Posted

    the world background is very nice, great overall storyline, MC is hard working good talent, but the writing quality is very bad for some sentence. like the translator don't know how to or what it should be translated to.

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    Monster Integration
    Fantasy · AnWan
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Commented

    Author is right about the muscle mass, and limit range of motion but the strength increase is at like a genetic level he's getting stronger but his mass is the about same. A person weight 180 can deadlift 380 with enhancement from the mana he still be 180 but can deadlift 3800

    Ch 19 Chapter 19 – Progress
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Replied to Roinuji

    Is the bone that increase not brain

    Ch 19 Chapter 19 – Progress
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    Sword God in a World of Magic
    Fantasy · Warmaisach
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Posted

    the story is common in a lot of Chinese novel, go back in time-> use knowledge to make big money and an head start+ op grow gear (maybe). an big bad event is gonna happened and need to get ready for that and that's about it. this is a fine story but an big problem that some story have and a lot of people don't like this. and that is by making other people(side character) weak to make the main character strong, For Example: MC spent hours trying to mastery the spear, but somehow he still got first boss kill and first dungeon, even in todays gaming world, people that rush or try rushing past the mobs/group of people at the start of an new game is very common, and they are hardcore players. so the facts that MC still get first kill bonus. is pushing the plot a bit too much. like the first boss kill can happened in like the first 10 hours of the game. base on how long MC took to level.

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    Rebirth: Over the Horizon
    Games · Stylish_Demon
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  • IronM
    IronM1yr
    Commented

    the chance of him getting the first kill is close to zero, pros and rich people know things, that normal people don't know. so the chance of someone creating a group or team of elite just to rush first boss, first class /class upgrades etc. is very high, instead of training a weapons mastery to max.

    Ch 6 Ariana
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    Rebirth: Over the Horizon
    Games · Stylish_Demon
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  • IronM
    IronM2yr
    Commented

    at least theirs's no quick recap

    Ch 11 Chapter 11
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    In Danmachi with a Template system
    Anime & Comics · ark_1
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  • IronM
    IronM2yr
    Commented

    That's what iq is, faster processing speed,the ability to take information in faster, processing it. i guess the author iq is not high. If not, he could've process what he just wrote

    Ch 60 Birthday and Halloween
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    Magus of the Wizarding World
    Book&Literature · Arrowinmyknee
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  • IronM
    IronM2yr
    Commented

    could just stay invis and followed until he meets the darklord

    Ch 58 stage one of the plan: sucess
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    Harry Potter: World on Fire
    Movies · Plug_O_Stien
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  • IronM
    IronM2yr
    Commented

    i dont see much point in this other than an extra -50

    Ch 58 stage one of the plan: sucess
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    Harry Potter: World on Fire
    Movies · Plug_O_Stien
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  • IronM
    IronM2yr
    Commented

    first time she turn into alex

    Noticing this, Copycat transformed into Ajax and started to punch and kick Alex as Kimura struggled for her life, trying desperately to scratch the man off her, but no matter how many attacked him, he didn't move.
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    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
    Movies · CORNBRINGER
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  • IronM
    IronM2yr
    Commented

    this is 2nd time she turn in to alex btw

    Realizing she had no hope of escaping a fight, she did what she thought was best, a foolish endeavor, trying to transform into Alex; in her mind, the only way to kill the monster that stood in front of her was becoming him, after all, she would get all his powers by transforming into him.
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    MARVEL: GAMER PATH
    Movies · CORNBRINGER
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  • IronM
    IronM2yr
    Posted

    i wanted to give this an 2nd try but i just can't get past the 2nd ch, an OP skill right at the start of the game... i mean when i first see the title of this novel i though he's going to *build* a character that's tankey with lifesteal or some kind of sustain to keep the character alive but nooo. just give the MC an OP skill at start of the game and f it to everything else. an point that alot of author make a mistake is that this is an *video game*. And theirs something call balanced. you don't make some very questionable *Easter egg* type thing in the game and just give out OP thing for basically free. this is a big turn off for a lot of people(me included)

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    The Immortal Player
    Games · RDream
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