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Review Detail of Yolo_Natss in Rebirth: Over the Horizon

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Yolo_Natss
Yolo_NatssLv122yrYolo_Natss

Such a shame, the story got me really hooked but the writing quality makes it a headache to read and understand. Fast passed, the story is going fast, random things happens when there is already something going on. Characters interactions could be more deep and meaningful, tbh I didn’t feel that much emotions and thoughts behind the conversations. Also I don’t quite yet understand the MC on a deeper level, he just does stuffs.

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Rebirth: Over the Horizon

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Empyrium
EmpyriumLv15Empyrium

Right, I picked this book again after months because I forgot why I dropped it, grammar is still bad, nothing edited, and your points are valid, but author doesn't seem to care about it