CeritusOrbis
What? Inspired in Macross?! Count me in! Writing Quality - Excellent Updates - reliable Pace- Fast Character Design - MC, I'm still not much fond of her, but she is well described and has a consistent personality and noticeable quirks. Secondary characters are well described. World background - good Highlight - It has that classic space-opera vibe with action and mechas! Mechas! Did I say mechas?
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author joined spirity. As it has the potential to win! With more exposure, this will become great and even reach a million views! Or anime adaptation even a movie! Kudos on your work and See you in December (if you know what I mean) π
Nearly cried my eyes out from reading such raw talent. This is not even an exaggeration. My first time coming across this genre having a FL for an MC. Eva is so smart and courageous, I want to be her right now, but not in a Game-verse, xD. Now, take home: Author's grammar is professionally-biased(why? Her English is so 'god'). First book I'm reading in a while with zero to none GM errors. The description is solid and too good to be true. This is a must-keep in my library. Great book, great plot, and great job author.
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Seriously, dear author! Doing something like this, for your fans, it just shows; how lucky, they should be, to have you. Putting Arcs, and explanations, even me, will not have time, to do that. You deserve, praise and a lot of encouragements, from your fans. Good luck, and also I'm a new fan, of yours.