Railroaded [Honkai: Star Rail]

★★★★☆ A Surprisingly Decent Read (Trust Me, I'm Totally Not Biased) Look, I'm going to be real with you here. The writing? It's fine. With a few years of writing experience under my belt, you won't find any grammar disasters here. Nothing that'll win a Pulitzer, but hey, you won't need eye bleach either. Character design and worldbuilding? Well... *awkward cough*. I'm basically standing on the shoulders of giants here since I'm working with an established universe. So yeah, those are solid - but I can't exactly take credit for that. It's like acing a test by copying the smart kid's homework, except legal and ethical. Now, story development? This is where I get to toot my own horn a bit (and since I'm writing this review, who's going to stop me?). This is definitely my strong suit as an author. I've got this whole plotline mapped out, the pacing's got momentum like a runaway freight train, and the story arcs? chef's kiss They actually go somewhere, imagine that! But let's talk about update stability, because oof. 3/5 stars, and I'm being generous to myself here. These chapters are thicc, and between real-life responsibilities and my apparent inability to write anything shorter than a novella per update, we're looking at anywhere from a week (when the stars align) to a month (when life decides to play whack-a-mole with my writing schedule). The verdict: This is my first rodeo in terms of actually putting my work out there, and you know what? I'm just proud I finally did it instead of letting it gather dust in my "maybe someday" folder. It's like jumping into a pool - sure, maybe I belly-flopped, but at least I'm swimming!

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A wonderful breath of fresh air, I hope to see more.

Very good Star Rail Fic, The MC feels genuinely alive with he's past and actions.

Only need to read the first chapter to know this will be absolute peak! keep cooking, author

too much drama bullsh— for my taste. but so far it's the best hsr fics I've ever read ngl. the updates schedule is a bit inconstant, but the chapter's quality and quantity is really great.

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A beautiful piece of work. Fanfiction on "Honkai: Star Rail" is rare, of all the few fanfiction this is the best. A wonderful presentation of events, the characters' relationship to each other. But the best part is the way the characters are written, their thoughts, the way they react to different situations, it's amazing. (Google translator)

While the plot is nothing new and the writting is good, i just find the MC pretty average. His whole backstory was just whatever and while it was interesting for him to take the Trailblazer's place, his overall personality and attitude is average dude. He isn't that generic but still nothing about him makes him completley unique and intriguing to read.

this is some good stuff! umu ya'll gotta read this or try it out if not... well idk but just try it out