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Drurlulu
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2024-11-09 18:25

This is here? I've read this on FF and the thing I can say about this is that this is fking GREAT! The MC is not a blank slate which I like already, He also have a personality that comes with flaws, and his decision and thinking are not stiff, some decision he makes are due to his emotions he felt at the time. He also have realistic conflict within himself that are just interesting to read. The Characters are also not just some cardboard cutout of themselves, like how March is not just a Bubbly Girl, and because of how the author fleshed out the characters, we get interactions between Them and The MC. The Plot: It's still early since it's only at the early part of the battle against Cocolia (Ch. 26) but the way the author is good imo, i'm not gonna spoil of course, but the author used the plot in Belobog and added their own twist in it, and that twist is what deviated this Fanfic's plot to the Canon one, the result of it is just so different than what happened there. Overall this is a Fanfic I would surely re-read after this got finished, Of course there might be some flaws in the story, as always, but this is geniunely a good fanfic that have an interesting story

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The chapters in total in FF is 26 while it's 29 here in WN for those confused

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★★★★☆ A Surprisingly Decent Read (Trust Me, I'm Totally Not Biased) Look, I'm going to be real with you here. The writing? It's fine. With a few years of writing experience under my belt, you won't find any grammar disasters here. Nothing that'll win a Pulitzer, but hey, you won't need eye bleach either. Character design and worldbuilding? Well... *awkward cough*. I'm basically standing on the shoulders of giants here since I'm working with an established universe. So yeah, those are solid - but I can't exactly take credit for that. It's like acing a test by copying the smart kid's homework, except legal and ethical. Now, story development? This is where I get to toot my own horn a bit (and since I'm writing this review, who's going to stop me?). This is definitely my strong suit as an author. I've got this whole plotline mapped out, the pacing's got momentum like a runaway freight train, and the story arcs? chef's kiss They actually go somewhere, imagine that! But let's talk about update stability, because oof. 3/5 stars, and I'm being generous to myself here. These chapters are thicc, and between real-life responsibilities and my apparent inability to write anything shorter than a novella per update, we're looking at anywhere from a week (when the stars align) to a month (when life decides to play whack-a-mole with my writing schedule). The verdict: This is my first rodeo in terms of actually putting my work out there, and you know what? I'm just proud I finally did it instead of letting it gather dust in my "maybe someday" folder. It's like jumping into a pool - sure, maybe I belly-flopped, but at least I'm swimming!

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