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Pokemon The Mirage Of Illusions

Author: Jaxadue_23
Anime & Comics
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A reincarnation story of a down to earth MC who works through a slightly darker and realistic Pokemon world. Cover Image is from @Jem_zard on Twitter.

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Chapter 1I'm Waking Up To Ground and Dust.

{The title is a slightly changed lyric from a certain song. Guess it the band who performed the song is a running joke similar to Slumga or Gulpin.}

POV 'D'

'What the hell... Why is everything so loud! and why can't I see!?'

I try to move as I feel myself stuck in some sort of cage? But the more pressing matter is that I can't breathe!

'Please! Let ME OUT!' punching at the wall? it slowly starts to give as I hear a distinct crack.

Pushing forwards through the hole I send my entire body through it and outside and onto a hard, cold and uneven floor. 'Where am I and why can I still not see!?'

'I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see,I can't see. Everything's so LOUD! I need my pills...I need.....'

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'Ugh... it's cold...' Waking up for the second time I open my eyes to a strange sight. As I'm inside of a cave with slightly smooth dirt walls and floor and snow creeping up and onto the entrance of the cave.

'Where am I? Why am here? How am I here? I thought I died back in my apartment..' Looking around nothing around me can answer my questions as the cave is desolate and uninhabited other than myself.

'I need to calm down... At worse I'm getting my organs harvested and at best I was kidnapped by random people and they fixed whatever problem I had that almost killed me.'

Looking around and standing up I walk up to the only entrance of the cave I know about and look at the environment around me. 'Woah... I'm on a mountain that's for sure.'

The mountain is impressive with many trees sprinkled on its side along with unnatural rock formations. 'Oh that's good at least it seems like this place is traveled a lot though I've never seen I mountain like this one its got to be at least a couple thousand feet I can't even see the bottom.'

'Ok! First things first I've got to find my clothes and hopefully I won't freeze to death as I wait for some people to come up here. I'm not going out there I've never snow climbed and I'm not trying to start today. Though while I'm waiting I might as well check and see if they took my kidney or something.'

Looking at myself I look at my ghost white fur and moving it around using my paws I see no scars are on my skin. 'Well that's good at least I didn't lose any organs. Though something still feels off... Is my fur dirty or something? Wait I'm pretty sure humans don't have fur. Or 4 legs. Wait!'

Looking down at myself I see 4 legs each covered in pristine white colored fur with three toes resembling a cats. My neck is covered in more fur similar to a scarf with a large tail behind me with the tip of it being red and wisp like.

'Ok... Calm down your still yourself its just that you have a fox, cat body. Though I think I've seen this thing before is it a Zorua? although I haven't played a Pokemon game in quite a while I've watched a couple of playthroughs and I've seen this one before. Its ghost and normal type I think and isn't it just a better version of normal zorua since its faster and stronger?'

'I mean I'm probably lucid dreaming or I'm tripping out on the strongest drug I've ever consumed in my life. Or I'm dead and I got Isekai'd and I'm some how in the Pokemon universe. Either way there's really only one option for me and that's to mess around until and be the very best!'

'Although the Pokemon universe is actually pretty messed up if you think about it especially sense I'm not human. To level up I've got to fight and kill things and if I lose at worse case I die and at best case I'm captured and used like a fighting slave.... Pokemon is fucked up. And now that I think about it does Pokemon have alternate worlds like what if I'm in the manga like I heard that in the manga the Kanto Elite Four are just terriorists who blew up multiple cities.'

'Ok one thing at a time first where are my parents I mean I just hatched from a egg so my parents must be around here somewhere or I could be a lab rat egg sent here for some reason since I'm Hisuian and supposed to be extinct.'

Moving around and looking at the cave nothing points out to me other than the rest of my egg shell. 'Nothing's here I've got to leave or wait. I wish I had a coin or something to decide for me but I mean staying here is risky, in the wild animals take and eat others eggs all the time but if I leave I'm going out into the snow and while I'm built for it I'm still a new born plus I have no idea on how to use my moves if I have any.'

Pacing back and forth D is at a loss as what his next course of action will be until another large noise is made near the front of the cave entrance showing the presence of another larger creature.

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