Jaxadue_23

Author review as always. Hopefully you all like the story and for my returning peps hopefully you'll like my new direction I'm taking the story into.

Thanks! on a real note I've been needing some criticism, looking over my own work makes me feel a little sloppy. Not to spoil anything but the Amelia incident is a plot point to be addressed later. Anyway I've gotten pretty lazy with making this story especially compared to the other stories I'm working on, the breaks have been personal with legal trouble, deaths and sickness but I hear ya. Anyway have a good day!

it more of a special body type. This type of body is possible and happens naturally in real life, it's more like a slight boon.

First, Kage doesn't know at the moment but he's definitely suspious due to this Furret being way stronger than it should be. Second, I won't put in abilities that break the game, like a Defiant Torterra with shell smash and Curse wouldn't exist. Only abilities that make sense through the Pokedex or physical attributes. A Flygon can have ability like Tinted Lens because it just fits.

I'm saying this for your well-being PLEASE don't do this for every card. Packs will be flying in this fic and you'll die of virtual cardboard overdose.

Exactly. Someone got the reference! And multiple old card will be changed such as Amazoness of the Seas which is also changed just isn't mentioned.