VesperNebula

So far, the fanfic is interesting. It's impossible to take anything too seriously right now, but the fanfic has good potential. My recommendation for anyone who reads it is: Read it believing that the author will develop the protagonist over time. Because for now, the protagonist is very immature, so even the genuine problems he has (and that Ulquiorra also had) seem more like 'emo' issues than real problems (all because of his personality). But in general terms, the fanfic has enormous potential. (And I sincerely hope that if there's going to be romance at some point, it's with Stelle. And only with her.)

This fanfic is amazing, seriously. But it seems like recently the pacing has gotten way too long. What happened in this chapter can be summed up literally as: Volcanion used one attack, Ogerpon attacked, and Sora asked the 'princess' to step aside. It's kind of depressing to wait a whole day for so little, to be honest...

Honestly, I have to agree with the other guy now. That final part was pretty lazy writing.

I forgot about Xerneas. But I think I'd rather bet on Jirachi; if you have Xerneas, you have Yveltal, and Yveltal is more of a demon than the demon itself (Giratina). Think of a terrifying Pokémon XD

What a strange guy, even replied on the wrong account. And it wasn't a 'comeback', I was genuinely embarrassed by the message the other account sent, lol. I cringed in my chair seeing the GIF and the way you wrote that, so aggressive and childish for no reason. But to each their own, a big hug to you boy.

Absolute peak.

It was an excellent narrative, this entire volume. But I'll be a little honest, I found the level of the enemies extremely exaggerated for a beginning. I genuinely can't imagine more powerful and incredible things being faced, everything will seem bland now. But overall, the volume was incredible. Thank you for writing this volume!

Damn, why are things involving Clara always so exaggerated in this fanfic? Preventing Weaver's bloodline, seriously? That's crazy.

So... will March 7th have any kind of relationship with Sunny that goes beyond friendship(Now or in the Future)? Or is all this purely to deepen their friendship?

I feel exactly like him right now, that fight was a complete peak. Probably the fight I've enjoyed the most so far in the entire fanfic.