Reviews of Playing in fate
Playing in fate
The_High_Father
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
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The writing quality isnโt great. The story development is a bit rushed, and it negatively affects the character development and world background. The protagonist was bullied and his sister was killed, yet he had little sympathy for Sakura, barely offering any help. He went from a no sex out of relationship guy to a sex addict within a night. He never used his mystic eyes of death perception in minecraft. Could be better
it starts well .. the mc has good skills and powers. then everything went to hell, there is not a character that I really liked, i dont like the character of the mc and i do not understand why you do not want to save sakura sakura or your other OC (i dont like her too ), you just give shcity reasons to not do it, the romance is bland / sshit / lame ,, in short it had a lot of potential (no longer) and good writing, just a mc that seemed that you did not decide what to do with it,
Well to tell the truth it's kind of dark. The Mc changes his thoughts pretty often and you can't really get a feel on him. Also the episodical idea that he will be a hero that disappears after half a chapter and reawakens after ten more chapters is annoying... I have read till only the 23 chapter so I can't claim how it is after that, but I believe that you shouldn't read this novel if you are searching for a stable MC. A psychopath, that's what the MC seems like, that's why I gave such a low rating to this novel.
i think MC is psychopath. Really man you have a lot of potential but you ruin everything. The characters in story have no life. The female character allow eveything for mc. Though former chapter are good but when Bennett die i started lossing intrested. MC really is most lowest trash ever. There are no good fighting sence ( because the enuch is afraid to hurt) or no silice of life (because he did not appreciated love the people around him for his bull **** past) . You tell. that you will erase sex addict sence but why did you write sex sence with vampire female. Great really great i going to stop voting power stone in this poisonous trash. Right hey author and his dogs who want to argue with me if you read my review stop posting your nonsense writing to my account because that's useless. I do not care even if you have. your fucking fantasy you fucking pyscho mother ****er.
Psycho MC. Became even worse with the progression..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Honestly I thought this Novel would keep entertain till the end, but when you choose Minecraft I started to lose interest that story was good, but I kept reading because hopefully it would be good later, this isn't my final review don't worry I'll create a new one " If " it will be good soon hopefully...
Hello, the author here, I will be humble and give myself 5 stars, now what I wanted to say is, this story I wrote just because I got bored and so that I think I will continue to write it for some time. The main character is slightly dulled (due to the gamerโs mind and because he committed suicide in his first life) so he will be somewhat neutral, a little selfish but he will help others if he can, but if the opponent is very strong he will describe it as just a 'problem And keep himself from the it.
Idk what to say to this, i just hate this fanfic, because of what he done to Sakura(or more like what he did not, help her which i don't understand. He even had a sister himself, and got bullied, so i thought he would help Sakura but i guess not?)and his first lover. And he is a sex addict, grammar is average at best.(does not mean i have better grammar, still does not change the fact that it is pretty bad.) character interaction is bland, there is no character development. I mean the mc is a mess tbh, he is a pyschopath. Not the of pyschopath that is interesting to read about, to see what he does and what happens(and they don't have any or maybe one lover which makes sense, i mean which girl would like such peace of sh*t. Besides crazy girls obviosily) he is the type which is bland,boring, and stupid pyschopath which makes you uncomfortable and cringe. The Female characters are not any better, they are basically sex dolls without personallity. Waste of time tbh, the only thing that is good is the Update rate. Besides that i found nothing noteworthy,extraordinary, or special besides that the mc is a hypocrite.(or more like nothing comes to mind right now, the powers are ok, nothing exciting. The story HAD potential, but in the end it is a disappointment. In the end, the mc ruined it with his mess of a personallity, and the shallow,bland interactions that the characters have. It just has no life in it, the mc does things that are weird,stupid,(or more like the author) to say the least. And reasons it like a Idiot, it feels like the author does not even think about his mc at all. Just look at this sorry excuse of a mc, i don't know what to say anymore besides Good Luck, i guess? In the end if you don't have any problems with the things i listed,(there is probably more, but nothing comes too mind right now so yeah...) this is for you. If not, then don't bother with this.
Ahhhh its finally time to review,well I have a couple of reasons, well first of course for the exp, and the second is because I'm lazy. Now back to the topic, I very like this story especially the author cuz he always replies and also I think that this novel has a very good potential since the MC is dum-, I mean smart and a very unique plot like going to the world of games(oops spoiler!)(I don't really care stfu) and the improments of the MC is good I mean he's a cunning fox or should I day a fuckin hacker? Well overall its good and I obviously recommend this shi-, *cough* I mean this story.
I'm currently at chapter 23. The story starts off A-ok but it gets better as you read through his training arc and I like how he acquires his powers. Like other reviews, yeah the part where he becomes a sex addict; slightly disrupted the good flow. The grammar is great and it's at a quick pace. The story does get a bit dark and those always makes me depressive, causing me to drop. So I hope it's not too much. Oh and regular updates.๐ Good luck.๐
