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chp2895mthCommentedBut I imagined that the protagonist could also do this new magic just by seeing it or something similar, and more powerful if he has the advantage of more magic, or at least easier for him to do it. just thinking about it logically. the protagonist was working at a science textbook publisher.(If this is answered in the following chapters, please ignore it, thank you)
"Me and follow the protagonist? I am the villain! And I need to make my own magic."- chp2896mthReplied to Obligation
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Sweet HomedetailMy Journey in other worlds starting from the world All of us are dead.Movies ¡ Jagadish_A_8390 - chp2899mthCommented
encontre estos calculos en UN wiki, nose que tan correctos esten Enel: 2.66m.Bola de oro: 4.75m.Volumen (esfera): 56110000cm^3.Densidad del oro: 19.3g/cm^3.Masa: 1082923kg Clase M.
2500kg(100%),...6000kg(50%)] - chp2899mthCommented
she could be a cop đ¤
This book has been deleted. - chp28911mthCommentedCh 11 He learned from his enemies
- chp2891yrCommentedCh 82 Rei's Feelings I
- chp2891yrCommented"Why would I have to do something like that? Demonstrations of power to reaffirm that I am better than the rest are things that those with inferiority complexes do."
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after the timeskip where hinata, sakura and ino seemed to stay with the mc, all those interactions and chapters (I know they needed to grow but if they weren't going to be in the initial harem why focus so much on them) so they would start a relationship with naruto (hinata) and sasuke (sakura and ino) was a waste of time, then you tried to correct it for all the negative comments, but in my opinion it got worse, maybe it could have improved if it had continued as you had planned, I don't know , the only thing that I really liked was the mc it had so much potential. I don't understand all these reviews with 4.5 and 5.0 *, you are one of my favorite authors, and I love all your other fanfictions, but this novel is not one of your best works, of course this is just my opinion, and well please keep writing and good luck, (mostly Google traductor)
- chp2891yrCommentedShe'll be pissed years down the road for us hiding it, but I can deal with that. She's not ready now.Steadying myself, I answered him, "No. I don't think she should."
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finally, a realistic newbie pack
[Opening Beginner's gift pack. You have obtained- - chp2892yrCommented
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This chapter has been deleted. - chp2892yrCommented"Is this really necessary?" James said with an annoyed face as he fixed his roughed-up black leather biker jacket.
- chp2892yrCommentedCh 16 ' Good news and...'