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chp289
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it starts well .. the mc has good skills and powers. then everything went to hell, there is not a character that I really liked, i dont like the character of the mc and i do not understand why you do not want to save sakura sakura or your other OC (i dont like her too ), you just give shcity reasons to not do it, the romance is bland / sshit / lame ,, in short it had a lot of potential (no longer) and good writing, just a mc that seemed that you did not decide what to do with it,

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The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthorThe_High_Father

Well, it's my fanfic, I can kill anyone I want

Seud
SeudLv4Seud

Sigh you can, doesn’t make your fanfic any less horrible though.

The_High_Father:Well, it's my fanfic, I can kill anyone I want
The_High_Father
The_High_FatherAuthorThe_High_Father

Omg, you scare me! Who are you?!

Seud:Sigh you can, doesn’t make your fanfic any less horrible though.
Seud
SeudLv4Seud

Boogie man

The_High_Father:Omg, you scare me! Who are you?!