it starts well .. the mc has good skills and powers. then everything went to hell, there is not a character that I really liked, i dont like the character of the mc and i do not understand why you do not want to save sakura sakura or your other OC (i dont like her too ), you just give shcity reasons to not do it, the romance is bland / sshit / lame ,, in short it had a lot of potential (no longer) and good writing, just a mc that seemed that you did not decide what to do with it,
The_High_Father
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LIKESeud:Sigh you can, doesn’t make your fanfic any less horrible though.