Enigmaticwordsmith
What a great read we have here! Detailed and well constructed. I read many of the chapters and I can tell it has a great pace and interesting plot. It can hook you right away with the good narration and the flow of the words. I am in awe, author! Keep up the good job, I will keep your story in my library for sure. đ
Lucifer Morning star- story approved. lol. I read the auxiliary chapter and how you've introduced and given the readers information about how angelic realms work, how the rankings in angels work, its honestly great. This is great tbvh, my favourite chapter was chapter seven I think where xxx goes berzerk and you've given descriptives reallllly well! cant wait (xxx so that there's not too many spoilers)
I'm not a fervent Christian, but I can certainly pick up on the references left throughout history, and I find this amazing, because all angel works always have a direct link to the bible and I'm not saying that this one doesn't, I'm just explaining that this one makes it easier to understand. So I recommend it, it is well written, with a good narration and a rich and unpredictable plot.
I personally like when a person uses mythology for a basic crux. It all of the sudden starts to feel very real as he have heard stories about them in our life a one place or other. I liked the way the characters in this story is shown, I really liked the writing. Even if I am not a big believer I would like to believe this is how rebellion in heaven took place. Great work! I really would love to recommend this to everyone :)