Synopsis really caught my attention and so did the first chapter and now I'm going to be reading this book. I really love how you came up with a story like this, it's going to be a rollercoaster ride.
The synopsis is really captivating. Your story is taking a different turn from the normal arranged marriage trope. I just know there will be a lot of bickering between these two. I love the story.
Okay first off, THE SYNOPSIS!!! That caught my attention like a magnet. And then second, the FIRST CHAPTER!! You have an amazing imaginative mind and this story is super amazing. Definitely reading this to the end.
This is an amazing novel, I haven't really been into system novels but this is a great one. I do like the character and how you introduced him into the story.
I am very glad I came across this novel. Arthur would be such and interesting character. I like the starting of the book, really captivating. You're a good writer.
If I wrote this, I think I would start calling myself a professor. This is amazing description.
OMG!!!!! You have been blessed with the most magnificent brain to come up with this piece. This is amazing truly, your book deserves more views than this.
Just the first chapter and I am hooked. You really know how to make the readers fall in love with a character. I would suggest though that in between your character's conversations, you attach a little sentence to describe their thoughts. It makes it even cooler.
I wish I was jin *sigh*
I love your story, this is an interesting concept you have here. I have never seen a book like this. There were some grammatical errors but it isn't too much, it's hardly noticeable, I am glad I clicked on this story.