Reviews of Overlord and the Seraphim

Amazing story. The new character in the story makes deviations from the original but very subtle changes and has a very likeable personality that is very close to momonga but differs slightly in the way he treats people and his emotions when he makes choices. The author is very good in introducing new characters without changing the dark fantasy of Overlord.

I am enjoying this version and glad you brought it into the light! I like how Jack and Ainz decided to ally and be part of the same guild. I also think it's cool about Jacks new "race"(for those who don't know, Jack was an undead in a previous novel that was dropped by the author). I think this will make things more interesting! Keep up the great work and I am looking forward to what you bring in this time around! -LordTouchMe

『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』 Finally came up with what I wanted to write for an Overlord Fanfiction. Still having fun though, since that's what counts. So, here's the Shameless Author, giving himself a review! 『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』『』

Great start for the story from what I read this might be the best overlord novel that I have ever read so please keep up the good work 😁😁😁😁

Solid start to an alternate version of our ‘Overlord’ with a familiar character from Z’s previous novels. Overall great potential and I’m excited to see how this plays out!! Give it a try and enjoy the jiggle physics 😂

Interesting plot. Character design is also interesting . Worth giving a try.................................................................................................................................................................

Thank you Author-sama for sending this link. Gimme more Chapters please, I feel like I'm watching Overlord all over again, with the addition of a few new characters. Love the Style. Just don't make the MC Stupid Good mentality. We don't need no Paladin.

Hello again, sorry for not replying on your previous comments but you cannot please everyone, even the best fanfic writer I follow has made some questionable world building and character development, that being said the best way to avoid writing yourself Into a dead-end is constantly reading your work and see FOR Yourself what you did wrong instead of listening to every single crybaby on this platform. I believe will all of that out of the way avoid weird traps that ultimately lead to leaving your novel filled with fillers like zealously describing everything. That's not needed, an apt and concise description will do. Harems are hard to maintain without making the other harem members seem like cardboard cutouts. 2 maximum is hard enough. Overpowered is not bad, Hyper plot armor is bad

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😼💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀💀😹 👏Looking great so far, better this way. 🤔 🙏😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇😇🙏 Cannot wait for more chapters and development.

sometimes it felt boring to visit everything like in overlord and just change a small part. i wished for mor new/solo stuff without ainz. 7 mth no update looks like aba.

A well made fanfic that has potential but sadly it was dropped and the author was not able to finish it. However, I would sttill recommend this fanfic since it was a very good read for me.

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No Plot Holes so far, looking great! Protagonist likes what he sees, takes what he wants, but isn't salvage about it. A bit cruel and roundabout though, in a comedic sense. I also love how he used the term "Dergan," it's a very fitting for a stupid Skeletal Dragon. The Lord of the Dark Sion is pleased.

This is honestly one of the best, if not the best, Overlord fanfic I have ever read. The MC is OP and is not afraid to use his power. He also does not just take a back seat and let Ainz do everything. The chapter release rate is really high and the grammar is one of the best on the site. His skills are also unique and I like how he is set up. Keep up the good work.

All 5 stars I'll jack author-kun off any day. ฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅฅ'ω'ฅ

Is it just me or is the quality better than the dropped one? Glad to know that the author has found what he wants. So far I am enjoying the chapters that have graced my eyes and suckered by brain. No harem? Sounds good to me. It's easier to think if there's only one other heart involved. People who want to have a harem can go to Colorado, they have a polygamist community there.