Reviews of Outbreak Chronicles: Dead Pandemic
Outbreak Chronicles: Dead Pandemic
Kyosei
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I will be shameless on giving my own review here. Despite the grammar, I hope anyone enjoys my story. Hahaha, I don't know why but it gives me a shivers reviewing my own novel. So please give my story a chance and add it on your library
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Your story inspired me to write my own apocoliptic novel mine is terrible unlike yours Wich is fantastic thank you for this. If you would like to check out my novel please do so thank you! Alone In The Apocalypse. Or. The Boy With Blue Hair. Hope you enjoy . And thank you author for this wonderful piece of writing.
To be honest, I didn't have the highest expectations when I was reading this. Turns out, personally I find that reading this is way more enjoyable than most post apocalyptic scenarios I've read. The MC is naturally a overpowered killing machine from the start of the story, he meets new people throughout but right now I barely see much development of the characters as we progress. The most I see is their basic backstories of why they are here or "Oh no! How will we survive? We can't let MC carry us, etc" I hope that as I get further into the story we would further expand on backgrounds of characters and their past lives. Another thing to mention is the writing quality, some sentences are badly written missing proper grammar (Barely Readable, hope you fix it or find a editor lol), with the cliche enemy rises because MC didn't finish him off and he becomes stronger trope (but at least he is strong enough to pull off situations and look bad ass,). If you can ignore these aspects of this novel and looking for a new zombie type of novel definitely try it out.
If you so much love apocalyptic stories then this webnovel is for you! Once you start reading this, you won't have time to think about other things because the story will pull you into its universe and you'd just keep on clicking the next pages until you realize you now have to wait for the next update! The scenes would keep you out of breath from the intense excitement, thrill and horror! It's really worth the read! Oh and this book is free to read so let's keep on supporting our dear author! đ„°
Hello Author-san! First of all I wanna thank you for using my idea and adding in to your story. It's a great honor to see the character I've thought alive in your story. So I have another idea for a new character for your story. I hope you can get some idea from this for the new character development. Character: no name yet Story: a dropout student who now became a shut-in and spend his whole day playing games, watching movies, etc. Found by Souchi and the gang when looking for a new hideout still playing in his room. Traits: have no idea about what happened to the outside world. Quite the handsome guy if not for his chunibiyo side. Clumsy sometimes but can make people admire him because of his intense focus when he's doing something (he got it from playing games). Likes challenges. View his life as some sort of a game. Have a vast knowledge about zombies (he got it from playing, reading and watching movies with zombie genres). Tend to overreact sometimes. Role: provide some humor to the story by applying his game knowledge to real life but not working just like he expects. I think he would be a great sniper in the group or maybe he can help chi in her research
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