Reviews of ONE PIECE : TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND..
ONE PIECE : TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND..
godlyarrogantz_305
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
too fast mate,the story develop too fast,just hope you could slow down the pace of the story,in just 3 chapter he got to admiral strength, it's too fastt
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I think this story has a lot of potential. Key points to look out for: 1) use of dialogue, think you could Make use of more dialogue. the entire story is written in Lincolns thoughts with sparse use of dialogue. 2) character development: The story is too focused on Physical development and has ignored much of lincolns mental development 3) world sEtting: the entire transition to rocks Pirates, the worlD government, strength levels are not too clear Even with the auxiliary chapter 4) Story pace: reading just the first few chapters, it Already the gives the feeling that the story will end in 10-15 chapters max. You want to make sure you have a modest goal in terms of how long this fanfic will be and pace yourself to achieve that goal
So i have started this story, and i am not sure if i am willing to put in time to read it. Mainly pointing towards the use of grammar and messy paragraphs all along since the get go. All i can see tho from the reviews, it's super overrated, grammar is leaning towards machine translations, even if it is not. just to put a perspective on it. Main character is quite a fresh thing, not what is usual for mc's to build on, i like the start of the story but. it's a major turn of with the grammar and how quick paced it is. No offence to author.
i love it hghghhgfffffffffffffffffffffgfggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggfggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggfggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg
Finally a writer who appreciates Haki. All the majority of anime and One Piece genres do not appreciate Haki and do not give him value. Finally someone who appreciates Haki, but in addition, I felt that it was a bad idea if he was a hero of the race of Solomon If he was a Saiyan hero, it would be a good idea, or a better idea, to add Nen from the Hunter X Hunter anime.
4 Stars ? I just wanted to read this to pass some time, so I had almost no expactations and after seeing the 4 stars I started to read. So the first thing is that it is so hard to read, because the paragraphs are to big. But this is still tolerate able. My problem is the "Cultivation" aspect. Splitting every marine rank in stages ? too many to remember them. Same with the mastery Low,Mid,High and Grandmaster aren't enough ? And also the mc who is strong enough to fight admirals after a few chapters. He's getting powers outta nowhere and even some that he shouldn't have like Rokushiki. Where ist the Character development ? I reached chapter 11 and the same thing happened 3 times. Attacking a Yonko and mc always fighting against all commanders. My recommendation is to read path to power its very similar and could be considered as an Upgrade.
