They made the hero a perverted man who the girls of the crew mocked as if he was a copy of Sanji. The hero never trains, he only relies on a glove, and this makes him lose part of the work. Why the hell do I have to watch someone look like a copy of Naruto, no matter how much he saves and helps Nami? Nami makes fun of him and tricks him because he's a pervert, and Robin is the same thing. She's trash. The only good thing is the idea of ​​using the gauntlet to eat fruit.

Unnecessary drama

Interesting But I will not read the story. I will wait for many chapters to be published and then start reading it......................................

When I reached Chapter 25, the translator is not translating..........؟.......................................................................

I loved the novel, but the biggest flaw is Haki. The writer did not focus on Haki or give it importance, even though the most important thing in the story is Haki, because Haki develops in fights. It is the most important power in One Piece, if I were instead of Luffy The first thing I do is learn Hak

Guys, I don't know what you're thinking. I haven't read every novel. That's why my rating is average, and I may change it later. I want to give just one star. Think about the topic. Who is the fool who would change the fruit of the zone? My story. My God, a government is afraid of It is considered a great threat and also a fruit that turns a user's imagination into reality. You do not have to be funny and silly. Awakening the Nika fruit

Well, this novel deserves five stars, but I won't lie, after transforming into a human, I felt that the story became a little boring.........

I gave this novel five stars because he hates gays🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

I will give the novel five stars because he hates homosexuals, they are a disease in society, and the biggest evidence is forcing people to accept them

A wonderful story from the beginning until now. There are not many fights yet, but the characters and the story covered all of this. I feel that if you had more fights, it would become a Chinese novel.

A Chinese novel stolen from the MTLNATION website At least tell me where you got it from, I don't want to hide everything Do not mention the name of a novel on a Chinese website

Finally a writer who appreciates Haki. All the majority of anime and One Piece genres do not appreciate Haki and do not give him value. Finally someone who appreciates Haki, but in addition, I felt that it was a bad idea if he was a hero of the race of Solomon If he was a Saiyan hero, it would be a good idea, or a better idea, to add Nen from the Hunter X Hunter anime.

A good story and I really enjoyed it, but when I read the romance, I felt like I was throwing up. I don’t hate romance, but this is a bad romantic novel. I don’t know why, but I feel disgusted by the romance.

I don't know what to say. I reached Chapter 122 and found that the development of events is very slow, the hero is stupid, and climbing the floors is slow, as the comments said, the hero is stupid and has terrifying powers, but he does not know how to use them.

One of the best novels I have read. I hope you continue publishing It is true that this does not make sense in the story, but if Brock ate a shadow fruit, it would have been a wonderful thing, or you could create a fruit that does not exist in the story and make Brock eat it, and he was able to eat it because he was a skeleton. I imagined the Sans Sans no Mi fruit from an Undertale can.

I really liked the novel, but I felt that short chapters might be a good view of a character's past in certain respects, but I saw it as unnecessary because there was no more to add to a character's past.

A wonderful novel, but I like novels that have long chapters, 100 chapters for example

I hope you give value to the fruit and make him use his imagination, such as making clay soldiers to disperse an enemy or making clay solid.

This is illogical in the story of the first in this period, he must be a white beard who is not sick or his disease is weak.