too fast mate,the story develop too fast,just hope you could slow down the pace of the story,in just 3 chapter he got to admiral strength, it's too fastt
godlyarrogantz_305
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LIKEactually in my fanfic there are people stronger than garp in the marines ,I'd you read the auxiliary chapter I have made a heirarchy of marines and garp ,SENGOKU is tier 9 vice admiral and garp wasn't serious when fighting Lincoln in chap 3 like when he got serious and punched him away and made Lincoln retreat . in the one piece anime garp was like the marines best of the best ,just read my auxiliary and garp hasn't reached his prime thank you for the feedback đ I'll try and make it slower and make powerups more believable đ