Didnt even notice

Chapter 51 really hit the spot leaving a major cliffhanger, i really hope you make him become a general bor under lord Shen bit as like a partner, together Conquering china with his disciples

I love the training and showing his might impressing everyone of those beings

Please author i need more, my blood boils as i read the beginning chapters. And please dont let the novel become arsle i want WAR, SUFFERING, TORTURE, PROGRESSION, RESILIENCE

The US parlament - a bunch of deados

Really exciting first chapter —————————-

It’s more along the lines of how easy it is for you or your whole clan to become killed, slaves or be treated as less than trash any day or second you breathe, your forced to have looser morals in order to survive

When I have time, got a lot of work and I want the next episode to be very exciting So I need time to write it

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Will keep in mind and use general terms of English and one piece techniques

I think my story gets progressively better, some inconsistency will occur due to English not being my first language

It gets better after ch 9

😂

Will they get contact with Wang Wei, The baatorian emperor Lucifer or even leylin farlier, possibly joining the tarot club?

Warning: this is only wish fullfillment as I couldn’t care about any critique

Danzo Afraid of Hiruzens control invcreasing and Hiruzen afraid of Danzo turning Naruto in to a Weapon rebelling in the end

Next chapter AWAKENING OF HAKI :)

I get its starting to be boring but all of the starting chapters have been finished, now it’s time for the juicy bits

Continue with your hard work my friend i enjoy your work

Its really great, just keep up the action scenes and daemon hunting and Your golden