Inara_Me
This is such a great story. The author is really able to pull you into their world. Excellent premise and development. It has been one of my favorites for months now. Although it is apparent that voice-to-text is used because many of the errors are based on sound phonetics (ex.."made" when its supposed to be "mate"). It was distracting at first, but by the time it became more frequent, I was so engrossed in the story that I tried to read as if someone was talking instead of the meaning of the words. An editor or running a spell/grammar check would make this book darn near PERFECT. But LET ME BE CLEAR-- I love this book and I look for updates everyday. I continue to pay for all the privilege tiers because the story is worth it. And if you're reading this review, you should definitely get into this book also :)
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I am on chapters 156. Author what you need immediately is an editor. Do you dictate the chapters and English is not your spoken language? Words are mixed up. Mate is written as made. Names are misspelled! Have to put our own words to understand what is being said! in whole, the beauty of the story is lost because of the writing quality!
OH MY GOD!!!!πππππ I'M IN LOVE WITH THISπππππ.. This is just soooo good!!!! β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ I just love your story line...β₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ It's neither too slow nor too fast..I am just waiting for more updates....πππ₯°... N the chemistry between the lead characters..πππππππ