Great writing and story, but I would not agree that it is complete. It ends abruptly without true resolution, and I don’t like starting something I can’t ever finish.

The story does not produce an emotional connection with the characters or the story. It has good potential, but had it been any longer, I probably wouldn’t have finished it because it feels rushed and underdeveloped.

I would give it a zero if I could, just to let you know that only the intro remains and the rest is posted elsewhere. Don’t get interested in the beginning because it’s not nearly finished.

Probably a good story line, but I cannot get past the writing - jumbled timeline, strange dialogue, and unnecessary explanations of certain topics. There was too much that didn’t make sense so I eventually couldn’t finish it.

Well…I did not expect expect this chapter to end on that note. I’m most pleasantly surprised & can’t wait to read what happens next! 😏

Thank the Luna Kane & the missus live!

No! He can’t go yet! 😭

Agreed! Love that small moment of fireworks at the end!

So glad they weren’t kidnapped or killed 🙌🏼

She’s a force to be reckoned with! Don’t stop now, Aila!

That bish should’ve lost her hand at least for touching Aila.

In Finn’s defense, Damon didn’t start strategizing on what else to do to protect Aila in his absence other than the gun.

Agreed! I’m so proud of her!

😂😂

Go mom. Someone needed to get it through his thick skull.

Just 2 chapters ago, in Reece’s reflection he admitted he never hated her. I had hoped he would add that to his explanation to her that what he said was wrong, but they still have more progress to make anyway so there’s still time 💓

Yes…Finally!

Yes! I admire her for this!

He keeps having opportunity-after-opportunity to be completely honest with her, and he just thinks he can change the nature of their relationship without mending the broken parts 🤦🏻‍♀️ #TeamTrinity

Not finished reading yet, but from what I have read thus far, this book is wonderful - deep back story, purposeful character development, steamy werewolf love. I can’t wait for more.