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13Blackdog
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This is such a great story. The author is really able to pull you into their world. Excellent premise and development. It has been one of my favorites for months now. Although it is apparent that voice-to-text is used because many of the errors are based on sound phonetics (ex.."made" when its supposed to be "mate"). It was distracting at first, but by the time it became more frequent, I was so engrossed in the story that I tried to read as if someone was talking instead of the meaning of the words. An editor or running a spell/grammar check would make this book darn near PERFECT. But LET ME BE CLEAR-- I love this book and I look for updates everyday. I continue to pay for all the privilege tiers because the story is worth it. And if you're reading this review, you should definitely get into this book also :)

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Obsession: the Lycan king's Human Mate

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Inara_Me
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thank you so much for writing this review! I will try to to give a once over before I continue posting but this means so much ❤️❤️

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Grammarly! It’s an extension & app! Also, any common words frequently mixed like the made/mate example, try CTRL+F to search for words like ”made” and briefly read to ensure proper terminology. This does the work for you & then reread with the perspective as the reader as if it’s your first time reading it word for word, or as editor where you’re more critical instead of viewing it as an author. This helped me tons as I would become engrossed as a writer & easily glance over critical mistakes & missing important words mixed up. Hope this helps! It was a huge lifesaver for me. (Also, Windows offers many dictionary, thesaurus, synonyms extensions which skyrocketed my descriptive writing & Grammarly helped easily fix improper spelling/punctuation errors& even suggests alternative se fence structures.)

Inara_Me:thank you so much for writing this review! I will try to to give a once over before I continue posting but this means so much ❤️❤️
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