Ultimatedaywriter
Narration is decent enough for me to read. Precise and concise. A perk of a native speaker and a fluent writer. I can only saw some of the confusing lines where I can see that it was mistyped. But still, the story potential is high. Character development is splendid and character design is decent. I can pity the MC but he was on the quest to redeem himself. Making the story much anticipated. Here is a five stars to brighten up your mood. ✨
Story concept is good enough to make you want to read what happened next. There are only little grammer mistakes which can be fixed. Well keep up the good work its good start.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Outstanding magic of writing It was definitely appetizing at first and then it just leaves you wanting for more after reading it. didn't expected it to be greatly crafted this book definitely sells and rocks I recommend it to everyone to read [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]