Narration is decent enough for me to read. Precise and concise. A perk of a native speaker and a fluent writer. I can only saw some of the confusing lines where I can see that it was mistyped. But still, the story potential is high. Character development is splendid and character design is decent. I can pity the MC but he was on the quest to redeem himself. Making the story much anticipated. Here is a five stars to brighten up your mood. ✨
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