BiggestDE
don't bother reading it boring and it about mc babysitting naruto and Sasuke mcs wishes were stupid he asked for regeneration when he could ask for sage body it would be the sake and better it not like he's regeneration is good or shit it takes to much time he asked for blood control with is also shit why not ask ketsuangun(don't know how to pronounce) he has pitifull about of Chakra borderline nonexistent he teaches naruto many thing and nobody says nothing and says loud to Sasuke hel help him awakening his saringan and should meet him later and nobody says shit so don't bother reading it just a waste of time
TBH i wasn't expecting much when I started but it was quite a surprise to see that the quality of the story is really good !! All of it is pretty good but please don't make it a Danzo is coming after MC story cuz they aren't really that rare....It would be better if he befriended shikamaru,choji,ino,sasuke and Hinata since that would also make sure Danzo can't do anything to him since they're all clan heirs !!Please do mention what level of control over blood does he have and what the limit of his ability is !!!
Somethings wrong from the very start first of all naruto fails the test entrance exam 2 times and you can only apply for it ones a year basically means in this story he didnt fail that means he wasnt supposed to be in the same class or year of other anime cast and what that means is what supposed to happen in you're story is that naruto and the mc is supposed to be in the class/year ahead of the class/year of neji and lee. Lee and neji class is ahead of one year to the rest of the cast of the anime