but he can literally sense emotions? how can he be dense? it makes no sense

oooh naughty 🧐

This is one of the best HP fanfictions available. Love it. Keep up the good work author.

It is a fin fiction man. A good quality one at that. Some of it is exaggerated but that's the authors call. Anyway it is a good read. Keep it up

The story is pretty great so far.The talent stuff needs to be fleshed out a little better. But other than that pretty good work

Pakira should already be dead though?

isn't he so dumb? he has unique Pokemon but he hides his face. Captain obvious

I agree. The worst is that dumb emotionless personality.

The first chapter starts with him getting a titjob from Narutos female shadow clone🤢

The protag/author is very flimsy. The needs are stupid. In the beginning he chose to be a neutral human who had detection magic and barriers yet still got "mistakenly" seen by Azazel and then decided to work for him forgetting all his neutrality. Post which he had his arm destroyed by incinerate anthem even though he had highest level of magic resistance and super intelligence yet he does dumb shit. Post which again he got nerfed by almost becoming the END which he realised later. What a bunch of crap.

all that luck and magic resistance is erased suddenly 😂

Knowledge which is free should always be absorbed. Why would you deny the knowledge just cuz it doesn't suit your taste?

I read the first 20. I did see progress but the MC feels too controlled by his emotions to be a genius

also why doesn't he try to hide his mana?

chapter title is wrong. Kirilia vs Tentacruel is correct

Dude this is amazing. Love it. Take my powerstones and keep the chapters flowing [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

I'll be honest.The book started off pretty well. Few odd things. For a reborn man he becomes best friends with a male kid which I find super strange. But the worst of it was where he wants to share his girls with the same kid/best friend and have an open relationship with multiple girlfriends and boyfriends. Respect the choice but not my cup of tea.

The author keeps calling himself she. Even though she was a girl in her past life, it shouldn't matter. It is super irritating to read and he keeps using her past life name instead of this life's. Again affects the readability. Just these two things are reducing the quality of this book by a lot. Feels like I'm reading some lesbian/futa mix. Not my cup of tea

Quite a few issues. one being that you used the genius tag but he clearly doesn't act like one. Secondly the grammar needs a lot of work. This story could honestly go in a great direction if the MC was more calm and planned properly. But kudos to you for the effort taken to write.

dude please change the gender. Since she is Xuan Yu now, stop using she and her name. Use the male form. It gets confusing and irritating to read