Itsuki_Suzuki
REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author made this novel. Good luck on your MGS journey of daily updates for four months. I've been there and I can say at least that it was a good experience for me. I am praying for your recovery 🙏 Please don't give up hope yet.
I hope I can get back as much as possible, but I still have things to do in my life that are more important than writing. I immediately apologize to all of you that I didn’t finish this novel, and it gave a cliffhanger to all of you. The life I live now is quite not pleasant. The first thing I will do is rehabilitate myself. But don't worry because I have a replacement, his name is Kirschblue, he's my trusted friend from the Philippines. Maybe I mentioned something in my novel about the Philippines, and it was because of him. He will temporarily manage my social media accounts and other writing accounts. I have only one reason to quit. • I want to move on from the past, the mistakes I have made, and the regrets.
I'm the moderator (not editor). Itsuki-san finding her own editor. I don't know what on her mind, she rejected my offer last last week. She told me so I wouldn’t have a hard time taking care of the feedbacks. If the author is offline or not available, you can still message me regarding for the comments, reviews, questions.
The author doesn't seem like English is his or her strongest language but it is a good attempt at writing for someone not well versed in the language. The story would do better as a comic where you see it visually and interruptions by the author within the story is more acceptable. I suggest the author to read simple English fairytales by Enid Blyton or Aesops fables to get a better understanding of writing fluently. I myself started writing after reading books by British and American authors. :) Good job, Author-tan, don't ever stop learning and creating!
The story is going somewhere, I just don't know where. But I respect this author immensely. Why? He actually has the guts to take a time off to think things through. So many authors in Webnovel simply rush along without planning out the story. When the readers call them out, or when they themselves realize they messed up the plot, RARELY do they have the integrity to just stop. Just stop and read their own novel, identify the weakness, and then begin writing. I have high hopes for the author and story, because he is doing exactly that. Kudos to you.