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My Time System

Itsuki_Suzuki

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  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
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Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4Mel_Aniv

REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE I am deeply happy that the author made this novel. Good luck on your MGS journey of daily updates for four months. I've been there and I can say at least that it was a good experience for me. I am praying for your recovery 🙏 Please don't give up hope yet.

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kpthe1
kpthe1Lv12kpthe1

This book is lacking only one thing, and that is proper editing, but it is already pointed out in the synopsis that the writer will make the editing later this year. So now I can only do is wait for the proper version and immediately soak myself in this fantastic book!!!

Itsuki_Suzuki
Itsuki_SuzukiAuthorItsuki_Suzuki

I hope I can get back as much as possible, but I still have things to do in my life that are more important than writing. I immediately apologize to all of you that I didn’t finish this novel, and it gave a cliffhanger to all of you. The life I live now is quite not pleasant. The first thing I will do is rehabilitate myself. But don't worry because I have a replacement, his name is Kirschblue, he's my trusted friend from the Philippines. Maybe I mentioned something in my novel about the Philippines, and it was because of him. He will temporarily manage my social media accounts and other writing accounts. I have only one reason to quit. • I want to move on from the past, the mistakes I have made, and the regrets.

Shiroooiii
ShiroooiiiLv2Shiroooiii

I think author it will be better if you join our community and tag your friends with your works. If you're not good at English find a translator and editor to make you ease.

TheOmnivoreReader
TheOmnivoreReaderLv1TheOmnivoreReader

Dearest Author, You're slow burns are exceptionally well drawn out and played. Makes a wonder how you became so gifted in the area of romance drama.

FirrShinra
FirrShinraLv1FirrShinra

You're a new author right? I can help you, first find a mentor that will explain and teach you to make a good story. Second be confident even your work is not good and last make a good story with a good lesson in the end.

secrecyoftheyear
secrecyoftheyearLv1secrecyoftheyear

The novel was a good fanatic story. The updating stability was not a good well because of his own problems. Recommended do not hesitate to put this in your reading list.

imagineTishaD
imagineTishaDLv12imagineTishaD

Hello Author, I am on Webnovel, and wanted to ask you something. I have messaged you on Instagram, can you kindly check and reply me dear author ?

kiminowatashi
kiminowatashiLv1kiminowatashi

Your boredom on your house will become nothing because of this story heartwarming yeah very recommended and the last support our dearest author.

Lalavida10
Lalavida10Lv1Lalavida10

Honest Review I will post this about Ishigami and Risya, I want that they still together even in the finale of this story. The story was too promising

ViolyFilles
ViolyFillesModeratorViolyFilles

I'm the moderator (not editor). Itsuki-san finding her own editor. I don't know what on her mind, she rejected my offer last last week. She told me so I wouldn’t have a hard time taking care of the feedbacks. If the author is offline or not available, you can still message me regarding for the comments, reviews, questions.

CiaaDReader
CiaaDReaderLv11CiaaDReader

The synopsis alone can hook you up wtf noice !!! Ive been blessed 🥲 Tears of joy ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️💯💯💯💯💯💯👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍🔥🔥🔥

WidestGrin
WidestGrinLv6WidestGrin

The author doesn't seem like English is his or her strongest language but it is a good attempt at writing for someone not well versed in the language. The story would do better as a comic where you see it visually and interruptions by the author within the story is more acceptable. I suggest the author to read simple English fairytales by Enid Blyton or Aesops fables to get a better understanding of writing fluently. I myself started writing after reading books by British and American authors. :) Good job, Author-tan, don't ever stop learning and creating!

Knossos
KnossosLv4Knossos

I can tell OP is trying very hard with this story. I think it's an inspiring work of passion. OP, you're doing really great work! It's interesting to read. Keep up the good work.

Shamira_Farhath
Shamira_FarhathLv3Shamira_Farhath

Good job. You've written a great novel.please take care of grammatical errors,I hope you'll do that coming days. The character development and world background is awesome. Best of luck.

catvi
catviLv5catvi

The story is going somewhere, I just don't know where. But I respect this author immensely. Why? He actually has the guts to take a time off to think things through. So many authors in Webnovel simply rush along without planning out the story. When the readers call them out, or when they themselves realize they messed up the plot, RARELY do they have the integrity to just stop. Just stop and read their own novel, identify the weakness, and then begin writing. I have high hopes for the author and story, because he is doing exactly that. Kudos to you.

Romel_Rosy
Romel_RosyLv1Romel_Rosy

Ang Creative ng author,mag ingat lang minsan sa grammar at sa mga maling spelling pero sa ngayon medyo tricky syang basahin,sa totoo lang maganda para syang Isekai, Keep it up Geran Ishigami. -rosibalasi

Pedophilia
PedophiliaLv1Pedophilia

I'm really shock if this going become a masterpiece in one chapter its got 500 views. I wanna say that it's going good story thats all. I'm not good at reviewing the story byee byee

Leviathanks
LeviathanksLv1Leviathanks

It's amazing and I couldn't ask for anything more. The story help pass the time and can easily keep your attention. It's great when you reading in the chilly weather.

AngelJasmine
AngelJasmineLv1AngelJasmine

Yesss I find another drama story I will read it but if your work is boring I will drop it right away. [img=recommend] fight fight fight newbie