Great job Author. The way you describe environment is interesting. The characters setting and the world background is well said. Good writing style. keep up your good work. All the best.
Great job Author. I love your cover pic. The writing quality is good. You explained everything in a very detailed manner. The world background and characters are good. Keep up your good work. Best of luck.
Your plot is indeed different. Congrats about that. Your writing quality is good. I'm pointing it out 'cause I wanna help you buddy. Don't make a sentence too long, it's actually confusing the readers. And if you've time please check the last three lines. It's confusing. Sorry to give you a long comment. Don't get offended. Your title and the way of thinking is different and awesome. Good luck.
Wow! Awesome story line. The explanation of the world background is great. The best part is the introducing part of the protagonist.The characters go too well with the plot. Keep up your good work. Great writing quality. Overall Great job Author. I loved it.
thanks for pointing it out. I'll check and change it right away
Thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm sure the upcoming chapters might entertain you. Please keep supporting.
Done a great jon Author. It's a different start and the characters are explained neatly. The world background is good. Keep up your good work. Best of luck.
Great plot. The writing quality is quite appealing. The characters and the world background is neatly explained. Keep up your good work. You've done a great job. All the best.
Great job Author. It's different from the stories,I've read so far. The character design and the world background descriptions goes well. Keep up your good work. Fighting!
Good job. You've written a great novel.please take care of grammatical errors,I hope you'll do that coming days. The character development and world background is awesome. Best of luck.
Good job Author. You've explained even simple actions in a smooth way. The characters and world background is great. Keep up your good work.
Wow, wonderful imagination. The characters are well defined . The world background is good and intersting. Please do keep up your good work. Great thinking.
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