MedTryglaw
This is the kind of story that is rarely found in this trash site therefore I consider it a good one. The author is not some politically correct pansy that is too scared to write a truly evil mc so that is always a plus. If you're not ready to read about the incarnation of ruthlessness in an already ruthless setting then I advise you to not even click on this story.
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I'm inlove with the MCs personality, honestly it's such a breath of fresh air to have a somewhat logical and somewhat evil MC that has already adapted to the universe he is in.. author I highly suggest you create a Game Of Thrones fanfiction.. I feel like you'd create an amazing story in the GOT world.
Alright, For those who want a strong-willed Mc or Ruthless Mc, This is for you or If you like the Fanfic of "HOLYJOKER" where the Mc is Evil, Manipulator, Ruthless, Selfish then this is for you, But overall this Novel is 10/10 For me Because, this is my cup of tea Question Author-sama ; Will his women betray him or are there some kind of NTR?
Writing Quality- 3 Stars Story Development- 4Stars Character Design- 5 Stars Updating Stability- 5 Stars World Background- 5 Stars Writing Quality [ Not much to say here. It is understandable and not complete bullshit, so there's that ] Story Development [ It is going forward and it seems that it could be a good Story, just read it, folks ] Character Design [ I love him, not a naive and innocent Mc but a man that knows what he wants, the way I like it ] Updating Stability [ A Chapter a day keeps the doctor away ] World Background [ The author seems to know his shit but I didn't watch the show for a year so I do not have a promising authority to conclude that ]
This is one of those fics that really belonged to this site, retarated readers, retarted auther, harem, killing, explicit ***, a touch of deus ex machina and as a retarted reader I love it, good job on this novel mate together with the other one, it's like chips that slowly kills off your brain cells but can't stop reading.
dude....ur paragraph alignment sucks. in small devices its hard to read and its clustered, especially since u use ellipses and dont separate the dialogues, they are like thoughts. use the ' ' [marks to signify the dialogue and dont write a part of a sentence in a another line]. even ur other bk, the same shit happened. fix it cause even if people are interested u just lose the will to read cause you cant understand. ur common wealth bk was interesting but 4 chps in and I dropped, its hard to read.
What can I say? Well Iβve read it twice already. Very nice work! Good character development, detailed world background and interesting narrative. MC feels real to me, just like any other person with little powers to use. Good job implementing the series knowledge and self-made storyline. More of a Kingdom Building during Viking age and slice of life instead of constant battles or knowledge seeking. Chapters are entertaining, not short. Grammar is excellent - no typos, no mistakes, though sometimes I wish you could give little briefing to meaning of certain words or idioms. I give it solid 10/10 even tho the rest of chapters arenβt there, cause youβre concentrating on your other novel. Btw youβre second novel is also nice, although I donβt understand Lithuanian history very much. But wars were described plentiful. Anyways, I couldnβt find other vikings novel that good, so this once is definitely must-read