Alphamini
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The book has a good storyline although not so different from many other Alpha/Luna tales and there are many unnecessary jumps. From the beginning, the writer starts well in developing her characters but we see a downward slope as the story progresses. Either the writing quality is poor or the translator's command of English is weak, making it sound childish and even serious situations, playful. Expressions were generally immature. In all, I appreciate the author for the attempt. β
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Iβm trying my best to give this book a shot. While the premise behind the book is promising, I find it very uncomfortable when the characters keep mentioning how hot the child will be when she grows up. Also grammer is a killer and the story has an overall chucky feel. Paragraphs dont flow very well and the narrative jerks around from one plot point to the next. I am curious to see how the plot progresses, but I will be taking many breaks so the writing style doesnt rot my brain.